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11:03:13 
Oh poor new folks learning Chat etiquette
 Graywing
11:03:08 Slate, Gray
Malpha

newer players
 Demon Mistress
11:02:50 The Scary Mod
@Mal @Graywing
Taken care of ^^
 Malpha
11:02:27 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Uhm what's happening in sales chat
 Zeraphia
11:02:19 Space Pirate Captain
Demon

Of course! <3
 MLadySkylar
11:02:07 P'Sky
I cannot believe word documents doesn't have more hearts to use >>
It's a work computer so my choices are a bit limited
 Demon Mistress
11:01:40 The Scary Mod
@Zera, @Chat
Thanks guys!
 Graywing
11:01:37 Slate, Gray
Can a mod go look at sales please
 MLadySkylar
11:01:02 P'Sky
ET
Right?
The world is so boring,
I glitter everything! xD
 Chat
11:00:51 
ET
I'd never ignore you lol
But I will pop away for a bit might send a message later and see how your day was ^^

Demon Mistress
Hope your headache gets better
And fingers crossed for the job interview
I'm sure you'll do great ^^
 MLadySkylar
11:00:15 P'Sky
Mal
xD
My immature but would poke it with a stick xD
 Demon Mistress
11:00:06 The Scary Mod
@ET
Your advise is good as well!
 Cybertronion
10:59:53 Cyber / Onion
I used to play on Horse Eden Eventing, definitely learning chat ettiquete is a lot different here despite similar rules ^^' sitll learning, thanks for all the advice.


I get kinda quiet in chat honestly because it gives me major anxiety every time i post, worried imma mess up again.
 Zeraphia
10:59:53 Space Pirate Captain
Demon

Oof a headache is the worst. Caffeine, ibuprofen and Tylenol are the best things I've found. (And then chugging copious amounts of water even if it's not a problem)

But heyyy I'm sure it's going to go absolutely fantastic!
 Eternity
10:59:21 ET
Whoops, feel free to ignore me in that case!

P'Sky
Omg, that is perfect. All inventory sheets need a bit of glam, world would be better for it.

That's relatable though omg. I too like to take breaks alone LOL.
 Demon Mistress
10:58:50 The Scary Mod
@Zera
Fighting a headache and a bit nervous, I have a job interview this Afternoon >.<
 Malpha
10:58:37 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Cyber,
It's hard not to want to mini mod. My brain literally wants to point and shout rule breaker at people sometimes lmao
 MLadySkylar
10:57:55 P'Sky
ET
I'm currently decorating my inventory sheet to next month, decorating it with hearts and cute things while I wait for my co workers to take their breaks because I refuse to be in break at the the same time as them xD
 Demon Mistress
10:57:55 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
Yes or directly dm a mod
 Eternity
10:57:54 ET
The no minimodding rule has become a lot stricter over recent years - it's best to just ignore it and screenshot + report if it's repetitive.

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11:03:13 
Oh poor new folks learning Chat etiquette
 Graywing
11:03:08 Slate, Gray
Malpha

newer players
 Demon Mistress
11:02:50 The Scary Mod
@Mal @Graywing
Taken care of ^^
 Malpha
11:02:27 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Uhm what's happening in sales chat
 Zeraphia
11:02:19 Space Pirate Captain
Demon

Of course! <3
 MLadySkylar
11:02:07 P'Sky
I cannot believe word documents doesn't have more hearts to use >>
It's a work computer so my choices are a bit limited
 Demon Mistress
11:01:40 The Scary Mod
@Zera, @Chat
Thanks guys!
 Graywing
11:01:37 Slate, Gray
Can a mod go look at sales please
 MLadySkylar
11:01:02 P'Sky
ET
Right?
The world is so boring,
I glitter everything! xD
 Chat
11:00:51 
ET
I'd never ignore you lol
But I will pop away for a bit might send a message later and see how your day was ^^

Demon Mistress
Hope your headache gets better
And fingers crossed for the job interview
I'm sure you'll do great ^^
 MLadySkylar
11:00:15 P'Sky
Mal
xD
My immature but would poke it with a stick xD
 Demon Mistress
11:00:06 The Scary Mod
@ET
Your advise is good as well!
 Cybertronion
10:59:53 Cyber / Onion
I used to play on Horse Eden Eventing, definitely learning chat ettiquete is a lot different here despite similar rules ^^' sitll learning, thanks for all the advice.


I get kinda quiet in chat honestly because it gives me major anxiety every time i post, worried imma mess up again.
 Zeraphia
10:59:53 Space Pirate Captain
Demon

Oof a headache is the worst. Caffeine, ibuprofen and Tylenol are the best things I've found. (And then chugging copious amounts of water even if it's not a problem)

But heyyy I'm sure it's going to go absolutely fantastic!
 Eternity
10:59:21 ET
Whoops, feel free to ignore me in that case!

P'Sky
Omg, that is perfect. All inventory sheets need a bit of glam, world would be better for it.

That's relatable though omg. I too like to take breaks alone LOL.
 Demon Mistress
10:58:50 The Scary Mod
@Zera
Fighting a headache and a bit nervous, I have a job interview this Afternoon >.<
 Malpha
10:58:37 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Cyber,
It's hard not to want to mini mod. My brain literally wants to point and shout rule breaker at people sometimes lmao
 MLadySkylar
10:57:55 P'Sky
ET
I'm currently decorating my inventory sheet to next month, decorating it with hearts and cute things while I wait for my co workers to take their breaks because I refuse to be in break at the the same time as them xD
 Demon Mistress
10:57:55 The Scary Mod
@Cyber
Yes or directly dm a mod
 Eternity
10:57:54 ET
The no minimodding rule has become a lot stricter over recent years - it's best to just ignore it and screenshot + report if it's repetitive.




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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:34 PM


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Getting straight into it. I have this little scholarship essay, a looming due date, and nobody to look over it for me. Help?

Prompt: What are your education and Career Goals? How do you plan on impacting your community in the future?

Essay: Min- 250. Max-500. Current- 261

Revised: 258 words.

My name is []. I'm a senior at [] High School, and my goal, once I graduate, is to pursue an Associate Degree in Baking and Pastry Arts and a Bachelor's in Food and Beverage Management at [] & [] University. This will prepare me for owning my own business in the future. What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment. I then knew that, unlike other hobbies I had tried, this was what I truly enjoyed and wished to spend time furthering my knowledge of. When I first had the thought of owning my own business, I didn't think of doing much with it. Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate. My wish is to create a community filled with acceptance and warmth by using any business I create. What I wish to do is hire certain nonviolent criminals and those who are beginning to age out of the foster care system, therefore giving a second chance to those who need it. This scholarship would allow me to gain the skills necessary to not only survive but thrive in my chosen field, as well as use my experience to help others thrive.


Edited at December 31, 2022 08:21 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:43 PM


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It's good, but I feel like there are still some things you could improve
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:46 PM


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Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:54 PM


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It does help! Also, I wish I could ask a teacher to look it over but the due date is before winter break is over so most of my teachers aren't checking their email.

Wilted said:
Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!


I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:08 PM


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Edited at December 31, 2022 07:53 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:20 PM


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Hmm, have you tried reading this out loud? There's a lot of commas/pauses. I wouldn't exactly try to compress everything into one sentence, as that can be a mouthful (brainful? I'm still tired).
Try splitting them up a bit?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:30 PM


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Try to change "What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made" to:
My passion for baking made me desire a career in this field, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:33 PM


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Be sure to add a period between 'made' and 'the'
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
Should be
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made. The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:34 PM


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I'm just pointing out minor things that need to be fixed for now
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:35 PM


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Wow, kinda embarrassed I didn't notice I forgot a period lol
Also, I appreciate any and all help!

Edited at December 31, 2022 08:36 PM by Flower Field

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