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 Kháos
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I love how Page One is just full of beans and toes. -WP Click-
 Lackadaisy
02:56:48 Stray, LT | H/H
Urux,

Gotcha, thanks :"]
 Urux
02:56:15 Urox, Uris
Stray
Hiya :P
I don't think i ever made one up, so feel free to just create one lol and I can put it in that summary post <3
 Lackadaisy
02:55:43 Stray, LT | H/H
Urux,

Do we remember the name of the Ice Kingdom -?
 Nevermore.
02:55:33 Never/Nev
Eight is sleeping in for me >.> In order for everyone to be fed and let out in the morning I need to get up at 6 so that I can be logged into the system by eight...
 Demon Souls
02:55:18 Demon/Death
Lost 10 wolves yo DS 😭
 Eternitys Gaze
02:52:44 tern / gaze
i'm getting slaughtered by bears why is my pack so useless
 Zeraphia
02:50:46 Space Pirate Captain
Thanks y'all. XD

At least I have today and Saturday off
 Urux
02:49:56 Urox, Uris
Vah </3 good luck lol
 Lackadaisy
02:49:30 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Sounds rough.. I don't like mornings either. >.>

Best of luck.
 Little Daisy
02:48:13 Tragedies
If anyone would like to Rp, Pm me. I have a topic in mind, please be willing to play male.
 Zeraphia
02:47:43 Space Pirate Captain
Thanks imma need it. XD
 Boeing
02:47:15 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Good luck Zera e.e
 Zeraphia
02:47:12 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oh man.

I just realized I got that wrong. I have to be to work *by* 8.

This is worse.
 Urux
02:46:39 Urox, Uris
Vah I agree, mornings are the worst. I'm up at 6:45 at the moment. But when I get home to Aus, it's 5am </3
 Kháos
02:46:09 
Also hi chat
 Kháos
02:45:59 
Anyone want to be on my friends list? *^* I promise there's no hostages involved.
 Zeraphia
02:45:38 Space Pirate Captain
Mornings are hard.
 Zeraphia
02:45:29 Space Pirate Captain
Stray

I'm working tues-fri this week.
Friday I have to get up at 8. >.>
 Lackadaisy
02:45:03 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Everything okay?

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 Kháos
02:57:32 
I love how Page One is just full of beans and toes. -WP Click-
 Lackadaisy
02:56:48 Stray, LT | H/H
Urux,

Gotcha, thanks :"]
 Urux
02:56:15 Urox, Uris
Stray
Hiya :P
I don't think i ever made one up, so feel free to just create one lol and I can put it in that summary post <3
 Lackadaisy
02:55:43 Stray, LT | H/H
Urux,

Do we remember the name of the Ice Kingdom -?
 Nevermore.
02:55:33 Never/Nev
Eight is sleeping in for me >.> In order for everyone to be fed and let out in the morning I need to get up at 6 so that I can be logged into the system by eight...
 Demon Souls
02:55:18 Demon/Death
Lost 10 wolves yo DS 😭
 Eternitys Gaze
02:52:44 tern / gaze
i'm getting slaughtered by bears why is my pack so useless
 Zeraphia
02:50:46 Space Pirate Captain
Thanks y'all. XD

At least I have today and Saturday off
 Urux
02:49:56 Urox, Uris
Vah </3 good luck lol
 Lackadaisy
02:49:30 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Sounds rough.. I don't like mornings either. >.>

Best of luck.
 Little Daisy
02:48:13 Tragedies
If anyone would like to Rp, Pm me. I have a topic in mind, please be willing to play male.
 Zeraphia
02:47:43 Space Pirate Captain
Thanks imma need it. XD
 Boeing
02:47:15 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Good luck Zera e.e
 Zeraphia
02:47:12 Space Pirate Captain
Urux

Oh man.

I just realized I got that wrong. I have to be to work *by* 8.

This is worse.
 Urux
02:46:39 Urox, Uris
Vah I agree, mornings are the worst. I'm up at 6:45 at the moment. But when I get home to Aus, it's 5am </3
 Kháos
02:46:09 
Also hi chat
 Kháos
02:45:59 
Anyone want to be on my friends list? *^* I promise there's no hostages involved.
 Zeraphia
02:45:38 Space Pirate Captain
Mornings are hard.
 Zeraphia
02:45:29 Space Pirate Captain
Stray

I'm working tues-fri this week.
Friday I have to get up at 8. >.>
 Lackadaisy
02:45:03 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Everything okay?




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animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 10:41 AM


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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday
Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/
i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 05:29 PM


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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!


Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 06:35 PM


Krampus

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!



i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.
Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.
thank you for your advice! ^^

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