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 Amygdala
10:23:16 Amy/Anpmygdala
Lmao
I almost added baelor in raffle
 VioletEcho
10:20:37 Vi, Echo, Aria
Zee all good ^^
Grim, Mir and I are ganna go fight some space pirates you in?
 VioletEcho
10:20:08 Vi, Echo, Aria
Grim haha yess XD
Mir you are very welcome<3 lmao
 Nesta
10:19:48 Nes/Spider
Back XD
Excho
Sorry I poofed
 The Reaper
10:19:14 Reaper / Grim
Mir
Me too, you're welcome lmao
 United force
10:19:08 
VioletEcho that link doesnÂ’t work
 The Reaper
10:19:01 Reaper / Grim
I think I just drew a planet on a dragon's butt- I didn't mean for it to work that well-
 Mirko
10:18:35 Mir
Reaper, Vi
I'm going to have that stuck in my head all day now lol
 The Reaper
10:17:44 Reaper / Grim
Vi
That it does, that it does. XD
 United force
10:17:41 
:)
 VioletEcho
10:17:32 Vi, Echo, Aria
-YT Click-
Hehe
 VioletEcho
10:16:36 Vi, Echo, Aria
United I like what you said

Grim lmao it does fit the theme XD
 The Reaper
10:15:46 Reaper / Grim
Now I have little Einstein's stuck in my head, we're going on a trip, in our favorite rocket ship XD
 United force
10:15:03 
There’ a lot of prof that he is real like where we go when we pass away in our spirit we can go to space with out needing air
 VioletEcho
10:13:53 Vi, Echo, Aria
Mir yesss let's gooo :D
 VioletEcho
10:13:33 Vi, Echo, Aria
Grim
Lmao yesss haha space dentures (Mm we should definitely explore and find out!)
Yess I'll get the food
 Mirko
10:13:13 Mir
Vi
I'm with you, off to fight pirates in a spaceship :D
 United force
10:12:55 
God created the whole galaxy and much more
 The Reaper
10:12:54 Reaper / Grim
Vi
Bet, I'll find the rocket fuel
 The Reaper
10:12:37 Reaper / Grim
United
Touché, I think of that too but I can't really draw that lmao

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Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:14 AM


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I'm bored and I love helping people, so in between commissions I'd love to help people correct their lines and give advice/critique.

I'm still a learner and I'm far from a professional artist so I don't know how this'll go.. :u

Just post down below with your art and such and I'll do my best to get back to you and offer corrections/advice/critique etc.. :)

I may/will be a little harsh on the critique. c:
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:33 AM


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just finished this for someone.

https://i.imgsafe.org/7e/7e1ca5f3f2.png
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:43 AM


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Robin XD -

overall I think it's a really cute piece! I can see your style coming along nicely. However, there are a few things I would change.

https://s22.postimg.cc/qau6rqjqp/1534588603291.png
Here I've given you a rough redline of how the kitty's body should look. Remember that an animal's face is just about symmetrical. Their eyes are both in the same place and their ears are the same size. Don't forget that floof c:

I feel like the front legs are a bit too spaced apart and the chest is a bit wide. I've drawn a guide on where the front leg should be. I know I sound nit-picky but animal paws have four toes. Try to remember that c:

As well as that the back legs are bending completely wrong. The hind left leg is twisting over as if it is broken :'D the guide I drew was rushed and I went a bit wonky on the back legs too, apologies. ^^'

I hope that helps. As I've said before it's an overall lovely piece. Keep practising! I can see your style forming! ^0^
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 06:49 AM


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Thankz <3 its a lot of help!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:44 AM


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Oof.. I need help Xd
http://i66.tinypic.com/65skk9.jpg
Thanks for making this thread!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:45 AM


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Heck im posting a crappy drawing in :D
Please.. help me lol
https://s33.postimg.cc/uxp2a5o5b/7_F850_D40-9_CAE-4110-_A622-_CA773_A64035_D.jpg

Edited at August 18, 2018 11:47 AM by Epoch
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 11:52 AM


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Twilight Moon -

That's a cute little piece you've got there. c:

https://s33.postimg.cc/ojzz74ogv/1534607305694.png

Here's the basic redline. It's pretty messy :'D
I recommend not using massive circles to draw heads. It makes them bigger than they need to be. I've noticed you rely too much on circles in your drawings and tend to make the heads the main point of the drawing, which ends up with a tiny body.

I'd also recommend taking a look at some canine pictures for reference. Draw some lines over the joints and such and see how the body moves. Just make sure you're using stock. c:

Keep practising and you'll soon be brilliant!
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 03:33 PM


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Oof that's epic!
Let me give it a try :3
Free Line CorrectionAugust 18, 2018 09:02 PM


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<3

Edited at August 19, 2018 08:42 AM by Robin XD
Free Line CorrectionAugust 19, 2018 08:41 AM


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lel i am going to be using this so much XD

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