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05:19:32 Is a dinosaur rawr

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05:14:57 Cat

See you soon <3

05:14:01 Cae, Blue

Also, im gonna dip for a bit to make food :3 catch you in like 15 min lol

05:13:19 Cae, Blue

May another girl of yours see that and spite you with an even better pup *^*

05:11:38 Cae, Blue

I love sanctuary wolves arriving with 200 dom XD

05:11:18 Cat

She is very interesting lol, probably the best thing I will get all night tbh xD

05:08:56 Cae, Blue

Oh, shes messy :O looks covered in blood, i love it XD

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05:07:05 Cae, Blue

Noobking, but... Sv...

Cat, oh? Do show? :o

05:06:03 Cat

Cae
Ooo good plan xD hopefully that works!

I just had a 52AC pup just born... she isn't bad :P

05:04:28 Sith Happens

He falls below my 48 r requirements though

05:03:33 Cae, Blue

Noobking, still, 45r ac sv is a great pup ^^

05:02:49 Cae, Blue

Cat, i shall try mass breeding once every season for now, and see how that goes XD

05:01:50 Cae, Blue

and SV??? congrats omg!

05:01:34 Sith Happens

Ah fuck. No I'm blind

05:01:33 Cat

Aww no D: atleast you got some bones but you will have to try them again :)

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O.o 55 R AC pup?!?!

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Cat, i think i lost all but one of your dudes' litters yesterday :(

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05:19:32 Is a dinosaur rawr

Pvp?

05:14:57 Cat

See you soon <3

05:14:01 Cae, Blue

Also, im gonna dip for a bit to make food :3 catch you in like 15 min lol

05:13:19 Cae, Blue

May another girl of yours see that and spite you with an even better pup *^*

05:11:38 Cae, Blue

I love sanctuary wolves arriving with 200 dom XD

05:11:18 Cat

She is very interesting lol, probably the best thing I will get all night tbh xD

05:08:56 Cae, Blue

Oh, shes messy :O looks covered in blood, i love it XD

05:07:35 Cat

05:07:05 Cae, Blue

Noobking, but... Sv...

Cat, oh? Do show? :o

05:06:03 Cat

Cae
Ooo good plan xD hopefully that works!

I just had a 52AC pup just born... she isn't bad :P

05:04:28 Sith Happens

He falls below my 48 r requirements though

05:03:33 Cae, Blue

Noobking, still, 45r ac sv is a great pup ^^

05:02:49 Cae, Blue

Cat, i shall try mass breeding once every season for now, and see how that goes XD

05:01:50 Cae, Blue

and SV??? congrats omg!

05:01:34 Sith Happens

Ah fuck. No I'm blind

05:01:33 Cat

Aww no D: atleast you got some bones but you will have to try them again :)

05:01:11 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

O.o 55 R AC pup?!?!

04:59:46 Cae, Blue

Cat, i think i lost all but one of your dudes' litters yesterday :(

04:59:12 P'Sky

Heys

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Hey Green

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May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

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May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

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May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

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May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

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May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

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May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

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May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

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May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

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May 21, 2018 09:53 AM

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Evee4ever228 said:
The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Thanks a lot ^-^

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