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Forest,
Bruh I'm not talking to you :Ä±

01:09:04 Reaper / Grim

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I think so XD

01:08:46 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
ð everyone but me probably-??

01:08:40 Reaper / Grim

Pinky
Yeah we're safe

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god i miss my nail and sparkle emojis

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Spirit
XD

01:08:13 Reaper / Grim

I think almost everyone in chat right now is queer XD

01:07:26 ♰ Vapor ♰

did we chase off the bigot yet

01:07:24 Mr Palette Guy

Fuck I need to do palettes but Chat is so good right now

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My best friend's trans

01:06:55 Mr Palette Guy

Marsh,
My brothers trans so it's a automatic support.
Couldn't be alive without my trans money supplier

01:06:34 ♰ Vapor ♰

Spirit

I am SO honored and will be grinning over this until I die, thanks

01:06:05 Mr Palette Guy

Collar,
It does give off you gives though lmaoo
Probably since you showed me it??

01:05:42 marsh | they/it

vapor
so true

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Spirit

WORD, all i do is vibe and rock out

01:05:07 Reaper / Grim

Marsh
They're people, and deserve to live their lives without fear of discrimination.

01:05:00 ♰ Vapor ♰

trans people go kinda hard not gonna lie

01:04:25 Mr Palette Guy

Collar,
The song you recommended is such a good song lmao.

01:04:05 marsh | they/it

hi gang
thoughts on trans people

01:03:40 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
I hope it will, but I wont hold my breath

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01:09:24 Mr Palette Guy

Forest,
Bruh I'm not talking to you :Ä±

01:09:04 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
I think so XD

01:08:46 Mr Palette Guy

Reaper,
ð everyone but me probably-??

01:08:40 Reaper / Grim

Pinky
Yeah we're safe

01:08:30 ♰ Vapor ♰

god i miss my nail and sparkle emojis

01:08:21 She /her/ daughter/

Spirit
XD

01:08:13 Reaper / Grim

I think almost everyone in chat right now is queer XD

01:07:26 ♰ Vapor ♰

did we chase off the bigot yet

01:07:24 Mr Palette Guy

Fuck I need to do palettes but Chat is so good right now

01:07:12 Reaper / Grim

My best friend's trans

01:06:55 Mr Palette Guy

Marsh,
My brothers trans so it's a automatic support.
Couldn't be alive without my trans money supplier

01:06:34 ♰ Vapor ♰

Spirit

I am SO honored and will be grinning over this until I die, thanks

01:06:05 Mr Palette Guy

Collar,
It does give off you gives though lmaoo
Probably since you showed me it??

01:05:42 marsh | they/it

vapor
so true

01:05:17 ♰ Vapor ♰

Spirit

WORD, all i do is vibe and rock out

01:05:07 Reaper / Grim

Marsh
They're people, and deserve to live their lives without fear of discrimination.

01:05:00 ♰ Vapor ♰

trans people go kinda hard not gonna lie

01:04:25 Mr Palette Guy

Collar,
The song you recommended is such a good song lmao.

01:04:05 marsh | they/it

hi gang
thoughts on trans people

01:03:40 Reaper / Grim

Spirit
I hope it will, but I wont hold my breath

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April 8, 2018 11:06 PM

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Heyo, so I need some critique on this ref sheet, I’ll be transferring it to a digital one soon. Please give some helpful hints, it’s greatl appreciated! Thanks!

https://image.ibb.co/f23q2H/03_C94_DF5_C542_427_A_A5_F3_164893_C2_C50_B.jpg

Edited at April 8, 2018 11:07 PM by Deja Vu

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April 8, 2018 11:10 PM

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Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, Ill add a mouth section

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Deja Vu said:

Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, I’ll add a mouth section

No problem :)

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April 8, 2018 11:13 PM

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not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.

besides that; i like it

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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hell above said:
not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.
besides that; i like it

Thanks ! Ill change that ^^

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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you could add to the side the colors that you used.

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April 8, 2018 11:21 PM

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Lunar Moon said:
you could add to the side the colors that you used.

Thanks!

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April 8, 2018 11:33 PM

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The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

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April 9, 2018 12:52 AM

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Deer said:
The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

Oof, I see that now. Thanks!

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