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what

was i summoned
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I wanna try and make a custom wolf look like my dog
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Yeppers, does it apply if I use it on a pregnant wolf, though? Like will I be able to breed her directly after she gives birth?
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Can reset Bred This Year count with jasmine but cant reset total times bred.
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Can you reset a pregnant wolf's breeding count?
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Urux,

I feel that - I've spent many days lying on my back, staring at the ceiling in the dark - the only light on my face is the windows updating screen lol -
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T^T

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 Empress Midnight
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I am using a tablet at my day program instead of my phone
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Hey you, you're finally awake!
 Empress Midnight
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Hey chat
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Hey chat
 Smilecat
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Ello chat
 Lackadaisy
11:57:07 Stray, LT | H/H
what

was i summoned
 SpiritGuardian
11:54:07 Mr Palette Guy
I'm dying waiting for BJake to buy a computer, I can't code without my Mac.
 Urux
11:40:48 Urox, Uris
Stray - >:) My laptop finished updating
 Urux
11:36:11 Urox, Uris
-Click-
I'm so confused </3
 Urux
11:29:09 Urox, Uris
Sorry! I was eating!
 Lost~Souls
11:26:33 LP(~Lost~Souls~)
I wanna try and make a custom wolf look like my dog
 Desire of The Hills
11:21:23 Hills / Desire
@Star

Thank you so much!
 starmutt
11:19:47 marsh | they/it
Yes, still need to wait to give birth though.
 Desire of The Hills
11:12:45 Hills / Desire
@Star

Yeppers, does it apply if I use it on a pregnant wolf, though? Like will I be able to breed her directly after she gives birth?
 starmutt
11:11:38 marsh | they/it
Can reset Bred This Year count with jasmine but cant reset total times bred.
 Desire of The Hills
11:07:02 Hills / Desire
Can you reset a pregnant wolf's breeding count?
 Vertigo
10:59:58 
dead chat!
 Lackadaisy
10:46:33 Stray, LT | H/H
Urux,

I feel that - I've spent many days lying on my back, staring at the ceiling in the dark - the only light on my face is the windows updating screen lol -
 Urux
10:45:18 Urox, Uris
Stray I know >:( I had such a buzz to write a reply as well. I’m hoping it sorts itself out if not I’m going to force a shut down and just have it update tomorrow during the day
 Lackadaisy
10:44:32 Stray, LT | H/H
T^T




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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

IMG-1638.jpg

First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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