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January 9, 2022 09:40 PM

Darkseeker

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Improved version.

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 9, 2022 10:14 PM

los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

January 10, 2022 09:41 AM

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los campesinos! said:

i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲

What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺

January 10, 2022 11:43 AM

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I think the nose just blend's in too much.

January 10, 2022 11:44 AM

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Revenge Full Of Lust said:

I think the nose just blend's in too much.

Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.

January 10, 2022 11:48 AM

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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

January 10, 2022 12:27 PM

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Eternity said:

I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

Thank you!

I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-

January 10, 2022 11:09 PM

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Now she just looks like a thick calved gym bro

EDIT: Fixed her... again-

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 11, 2022 12:22 PM

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I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick

January 11, 2022 12:23 PM

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Vanilla Latte said:

I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick

It's more of a style choice makin' them curvy!

I appreciate you taking the time to comment! I appreciate it so so so much! <333 ^///^

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