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 Graywing
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Katy

of course
 distant-lands
08:55:22 katy | beetle
gray,
so kind of you :') lol
 Graywing
08:54:45 Slate, Gray
Katy

Her you go, i now its not much but :)
 distant-lands
08:53:27 katy | beetle
someone should lend me their motivation so i can finish these adopts e.e
 TheFlyingKitten
08:50:34 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Beyond that I'm just binging YouTube and sour candy. ~w~
 Malpha
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Anyone want to pm me I need someone to help look at my wolves
 Graywing
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petri

i suppose
 TheFlyingKitten
08:44:22 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Gray

That's why you gotta keep them exploring. Get those muscles fed and cared for! >:3
 distant-lands
08:40:39 katy | beetle
6 females all at 83 hours; yet none are in labor e.e
 Graywing
08:40:33 Slate, Gray
Petri

I thought my wolves were just big backs
 TheFlyingKitten
08:39:24 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Gray

Ah, good to know I'm not the only one. It was weird but I was so caught off guard I had to chuckle.
 Graywing
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Petri

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 Serpents
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if anyone sees my wolves in explore pm me
 TheFlyingKitten
08:35:26 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Gray

Yeah, I did. Had a feeling it was a bug.
 Graywing
08:32:49 Slate, Gray
Petri

did you feed the explore team? If so i made a bug report already
 TheFlyingKitten
08:30:13 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Damn, I wasn't aware six wolves could devour ten feedings worth of meals, lol.
 Kháos
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T-T Forgot how to get rid of a border for a part of my palette. Looked at an old palette for two seconds. Literally just switched from 2px to 0px X_X
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Savik

weird, on my laptop its fine
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I had no problems earlier this morning
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 Graywing
09:01:15 Slate, Gray
Katy

of course
 distant-lands
08:55:22 katy | beetle
gray,
so kind of you :') lol
 Graywing
08:54:45 Slate, Gray
Katy

Her you go, i now its not much but :)
 distant-lands
08:53:27 katy | beetle
someone should lend me their motivation so i can finish these adopts e.e
 TheFlyingKitten
08:50:34 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Beyond that I'm just binging YouTube and sour candy. ~w~
 Malpha
08:46:43 St. Algo's Pack/Mal
Anyone want to pm me I need someone to help look at my wolves
 Graywing
08:46:10 Slate, Gray
petri

i suppose
 TheFlyingKitten
08:44:22 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Gray

That's why you gotta keep them exploring. Get those muscles fed and cared for! >:3
 distant-lands
08:40:39 katy | beetle
6 females all at 83 hours; yet none are in labor e.e
 Graywing
08:40:33 Slate, Gray
Petri

I thought my wolves were just big backs
 TheFlyingKitten
08:39:24 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Gray

Ah, good to know I'm not the only one. It was weird but I was so caught off guard I had to chuckle.
 Graywing
08:36:56 Slate, Gray
Petri

-WP Click-
 Serpents
08:35:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
if anyone sees my wolves in explore pm me
 TheFlyingKitten
08:35:26 Petri Dish/Sorceress
@Gray

Yeah, I did. Had a feeling it was a bug.
 Graywing
08:32:49 Slate, Gray
Petri

did you feed the explore team? If so i made a bug report already
 TheFlyingKitten
08:30:13 Petri Dish/Sorceress
Damn, I wasn't aware six wolves could devour ten feedings worth of meals, lol.
 Kháos
08:26:18 
T-T Forgot how to get rid of a border for a part of my palette. Looked at an old palette for two seconds. Literally just switched from 2px to 0px X_X
 Graywing
08:25:23 Slate, Gray
Savik

weird, on my laptop its fine
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08:24:56 Nalavara
I had no problems earlier this morning
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Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:41 PM


sock monkey

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Hey folks! Looking for some critiques. This site grew my skill exponentially, and I'm always looking to improve.

exp a. of past horrors:

(do not critique this piece, it's old and just for comparison!)

Click, there’s so much more where that came from
(2019 sob)

I am looking for critiques - I am not sensitive, please tear my work apart. You all are very sweet with your compliments, but I would like to improve - my ego does not need boosting at the moment.

my gallery is here, but these are the works I'm most proud of: click

please send help! I will not take anything personally, no worries. I'm looking more for general critiques than piece-specific redlines, etc., but whatever floats your boat.


Edited at November 1, 2021 08:48 PM by sock monkey
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:43 PM


Silver Creek

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I personally think the neck looks a little thick, however, I like sleek and probably too thin looks on canines. It looks great to me other than that!
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:46 PM


sock monkey

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Oh, that's old art for comparison! Sorry for the confusion, my gallery is linked just below :')
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:48 PM


Silver Creek

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Whoops, my apologies!

sock monkey said:
Oh, that's old art for comparison! Sorry for the confusion, my gallery is linked just below :')


Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:52 PM


Dystopia

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Hello - I suck at describing things - so could I sketch over your art to show you what I'm taliking about?
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:52 PM


sock monkey

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Of course!
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:54 PM


Dystopia

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Hello - I suck at describing things - so could I sketch over your art to show you what I'm taliking about?
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 08:55 PM


Dystopia

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Sorry for the double - I'll poast something in about an hour once I get off of work^^ (if this dosnt get addressed by someone else)
and I know you said your ego dosnt need boasting - but your art is amazing! I'll need to get my hands on some eventually
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 09:26 PM


Sneaky Smeagol

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Aight, you know I adore your art, think its stunning, and have seen it from the start, but thats not what ya want lol.
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I really only see a few things, and they're barely noticeable and could probably just be passed off as style.
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I feel some of the front facing views you do look slightly flat. But from the other way. The chests/legs seem very narrow. Not that it doesn't seem three dimensional, just as if they've sort of been squished/narrowed down. With this guy for example, I feel they're lacking a bit of hindquarter. The perspective/angle is spot on, but I feel there should be more width. Give them horses big butts XD
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On this one, the hind legs seem slightly off. If you were to imagine the creature flipped, its right hind is off center and attached to a different part of the body from the left one. They also seem a bit too long on the femur and short through the cannon (or whatever its called on a canine). Then again, its a mythical creature and appears to be a hybrid, so the anatomy could be purposefully differing from a more realistic species to give it a fantasy appearance.

Edited at November 1, 2021 09:27 PM by Sneaky Smeagol
Critiques <3November 1, 2021 09:42 PM


sock monkey

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Thanks so much! And yeah, I completely agree on both those points aha, I do need to start drawing out more proportional horse butts lmao, (no bc they thick when you really think about it) it's been too long since I was around them :') and thanks for pointing that out on the second one! So many people want to commission canines that I'm losing my equine touch lmao
again, I really appreciate it <3

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