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she slept in my bed for the first time last night and has been really cuddly with me today. Usually she only cuddles my parents.

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I don't think i have had such a bad score
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44 wolves hear them, and 31 wolves howled back!
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same here :P
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Lol hate when that happens, they finally wanna cuddle but then you have to do something
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why must you disappoint me e.e

such a terrible litter
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Heya!January 9, 2022 09:40 PM


Drakaina

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Improved version.

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS
Heya!January 9, 2022 10:14 PM


los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair
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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs
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and the nose is a lil eh
Heya!January 10, 2022 09:41 AM


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los campesinos! said:
i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair
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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs
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and the nose is a lil eh


I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲
What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:43 AM


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I think the nose just blend's in too much.
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:44 AM


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Revenge Full Of Lust said:
I think the nose just blend's in too much.


Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:48 AM


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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!
The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!
Heya!January 10, 2022 12:27 PM


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Eternity said:
I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!
The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!


Thank you!
I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-
Heya!January 10, 2022 11:09 PM


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Now she just looks like a thick calved gym bro
EDIT: Fixed her... again-

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS
Heya!January 11, 2022 12:22 PM


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I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick
Heya!January 11, 2022 12:23 PM


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Vanilla Latte said:
I think she looks great. But her hips and thighs are a bit thick


It's more of a style choice makin' them curvy!
I appreciate you taking the time to comment! I appreciate it so so so much! <333 ^///^

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