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Critique?August 24, 2018 04:29 PM


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Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
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Critique?August 24, 2018 04:40 PM


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It's so cute :0
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:47 PM


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Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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TheAlphaPack said:
Maybe put the frosting in front of the hedgehog, make it more centered-looking? It's a really great piece. Be proud!

Ooh good idea, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:49 PM


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It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:51 PM


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starwolfs said:
It looks cute, my critique would be maybe make the cupcake cups bottom a little rounder ( more 3D ish ) and bring the topping to the foreground so it’s in front of it unless it supposed to be on the other side

That’s it I hoped I helped


You definitely did, thanks!
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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That's beautiful! And really cute :D
Critique?August 24, 2018 04:58 PM


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The frosting and the cherry seem to be layered pretty weirdly? Maybe try to make them look like they're each sitting on top of the other rather than behind it. ^^ I absolutely adore how you did the hedgehog though! :'D
Critique?August 24, 2018 05:01 PM


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The bottom half almost looks like it's in front of the quills on the top. Maybe make the quills that overlap the lighter half of the porcupine a bit longer, so that it's clear that the front half isn't sticking out in a way.

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