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01:08:26 Slate, Gray

Vah

thanks, i debated geting rid of her because she wouldnt give me anything but now...

01:07:09 Guarder of the Sheep

Ooh look at my colors now!!! :O

01:07:03 Stray, LT | H/H

My blind ass squinting at my screen right now

e.e

01:05:36 You're just yellow

-WP Click-

I'm suing this little bitch, and her bastard pups >:^

01:02:26 Space Pirate Captain

Gray

XDD that checks out honestly.

That's a solid litter too. Congrats!

01:01:57 Slate, Gray

Vah, Khaos

the only good pups she gives XD

01:00:09 Slate, Gray

Vah

oooh best litter ever

12:59:34

eyes.*

12:59:28

That's a nice litter in my eyesz

12:59:16 Space Pirate Captain

Gray

That's a solid litter--

1 UL, 1 DH and 1 Spina Bifida

12:58:21 Slate, Gray

-WP Click-

pup check?

12:58:11 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Sheep,
Yeah lol it looks like the same colors but just darker shades

12:57:15 Is a dinosaur rawr

Lmao wow I can't read ;-;

12:56:57 Is a dinosaur rawr

Shade it's under pack activities ^^

12:56:33 Guarder of the Sheep

Yours are a little darker than mine

12:56:27 Space Pirate Captain

Hmm...
do I do a quick stupid quote sketch and then get lunch?
Go find lunch and then get into a solid writing / art thing?

12:55:01 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Mmm same colors?

12:53:31 Space Pirate Captain

Heya!

12:51:50 Guarder of the Sheep

Hey chat.

12:48:10 Graves | Chaos

That's true, maybe it'll just take some adjustment time

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01:08:26 Slate, Gray

Vah

thanks, i debated geting rid of her because she wouldnt give me anything but now...

01:07:09 Guarder of the Sheep

Ooh look at my colors now!!! :O

01:07:03 Stray, LT | H/H

My blind ass squinting at my screen right now

e.e

01:05:36 You're just yellow

-WP Click-

I'm suing this little bitch, and her bastard pups >:^

01:02:26 Space Pirate Captain

Gray

XDD that checks out honestly.

That's a solid litter too. Congrats!

01:01:57 Slate, Gray

Vah, Khaos

the only good pups she gives XD

01:00:09 Slate, Gray

Vah

oooh best litter ever

12:59:34

eyes.*

12:59:28

That's a nice litter in my eyesz

12:59:16 Space Pirate Captain

Gray

That's a solid litter--

1 UL, 1 DH and 1 Spina Bifida

12:58:21 Slate, Gray

-WP Click-

pup check?

12:58:11 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Sheep,
Yeah lol it looks like the same colors but just darker shades

12:57:15 Is a dinosaur rawr

Lmao wow I can't read ;-;

12:56:57 Is a dinosaur rawr

Shade it's under pack activities ^^

12:56:33 Guarder of the Sheep

Yours are a little darker than mine

12:56:27 Space Pirate Captain

Hmm...
do I do a quick stupid quote sketch and then get lunch?
Go find lunch and then get into a solid writing / art thing?

12:55:01 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Mmm same colors?

12:53:31 Space Pirate Captain

Heya!

12:51:50 Guarder of the Sheep

Hey chat.

12:48:10 Graves | Chaos

That's true, maybe it'll just take some adjustment time

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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