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Ah not familiar with MMC so nope lol
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Aww thanks! :D
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Honestly, I think it's perfect the way it is.
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Cap
Aw thanks!! :D Any ideas for accessories? If any?
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Literally vibrating because holy catfish that is gorgeous--
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Not sure if you know MMC but have you seen her new breed?
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I'm off got to get ready for bed
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Back from arting
I've got Californians and new Zealand Rabbits
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I gave my Flemish and BEW mini Rex program to a friend. Blue Flemish o.o very pretty rabbits
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My mini Rex that I am very proud of and debating on selling XD transported his parents from Canada
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Exactly why I'm going to sleep right now... logged on to check mail, looked at chat briefly and swear I read "Fetish rabbits"... it said "Flemish giants". Goodnight chat :,)
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just inplulse baught a bullfinch from the event shop
 Serpents
10:56:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Skil any XD I just want all and more of every bird decor wp has I swear I don't have a problem
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Flemish Giants are my favorite breed of rabbit
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Zane
What kind of birds?
 Skilow
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I'm actually getting some red eyed white flemishes this weekend. Super excited because they are hard to find. Also super excited I got Belgian hares as they are also hard to find.
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In my early days of rabbit breeding we had these Janky hutches that the rabbits would get out of all the time. One was in my yard but someone still decided to come in the yard and try to take it. Didn't even knock on the door or anything. Thank God, the neighbors were on the porch and told the girl that rabbit wasn't hers and that they would take it and bring it back to me. Like I would understand if the rabbit was out by the road or something. But she had to walk a good 10 yards into my backyard to grab it. Girl at least knock and tell me my baby is loose XD
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I need to get more birds

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Skilow
Ah not familiar with MMC so nope lol
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Cap
Aww thanks! :D
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Grim

Honestly, I think it's perfect the way it is.
 The Reaper
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Cap
Aw thanks!! :D Any ideas for accessories? If any?
 Zeraphia
11:07:55 Space Pirate Captain
Grim

Literally vibrating because holy catfish that is gorgeous--
 Skilow
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Not sure if you know MMC but have you seen her new breed?
 Serpents
11:07:43 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I'm off got to get ready for bed
 The Reaper
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Thoughts?
-Click-
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11:04:56 
Back from arting
I've got Californians and new Zealand Rabbits
 Skilow
11:01:28 Skil, Slick Cow
Myth
I gave my Flemish and BEW mini Rex program to a friend. Blue Flemish o.o very pretty rabbits
 Skilow
11:00:17 Skil, Slick Cow
-Click-
My mini Rex that I am very proud of and debating on selling XD transported his parents from Canada
 Kháos
11:00:13 
Exactly why I'm going to sleep right now... logged on to check mail, looked at chat briefly and swear I read "Fetish rabbits"... it said "Flemish giants". Goodnight chat :,)
 Serpents
10:56:42 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
just inplulse baught a bullfinch from the event shop
 Serpents
10:56:09 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
@Skil any XD I just want all and more of every bird decor wp has I swear I don't have a problem
 Mythology
10:55:30 
Flemish Giants are my favorite breed of rabbit
 Forest whisp
10:55:02 She /her/ daughter/
Hay
 Skilow
10:53:19 Skil, Slick Cow
Zane
What kind of birds?
 Skilow
10:53:03 Skil, Slick Cow
I'm actually getting some red eyed white flemishes this weekend. Super excited because they are hard to find. Also super excited I got Belgian hares as they are also hard to find.
 Skilow
10:51:30 Skil, Slick Cow
In my early days of rabbit breeding we had these Janky hutches that the rabbits would get out of all the time. One was in my yard but someone still decided to come in the yard and try to take it. Didn't even knock on the door or anything. Thank God, the neighbors were on the porch and told the girl that rabbit wasn't hers and that they would take it and bring it back to me. Like I would understand if the rabbit was out by the road or something. But she had to walk a good 10 yards into my backyard to grab it. Girl at least knock and tell me my baby is loose XD
 Serpents
10:50:57 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
I need to get more birds




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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