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Me passing out at 11:30 just amazed--

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XD

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11:25:13 marsh | they/it

i wish i slept at midnight lol i always drag it till 3am

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IK right

11:24:24 marsh | they/it

midnight is a perfectly good sleeping time in my opinion

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Playing beetle

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My time it is 10:20 now

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I am in bed and bored I don't fall asleep until like 12:00

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I bet they'll do well, absolutely love them :3

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I've set up the chaos now lol let's see how they do the poll was mostly between 50 and 100

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Thanks Cap :3

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I'd say the auctions work just fine.

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-WP Click- dose this make sense ? as I have never done Genderflux before for an charature and want to make sure its accurate pm me or comment

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I'm trying to decide if I should keep doing these as auctions or have them be set price adopts

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Ah not familiar with MMC so nope lol

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11:29:46 She /her/ daughter/

Funny

11:28:24 Space Pirate Captain

Me passing out at 11:30 just amazed--

11:26:11 She /her/ daughter/

XD

11:26:05 She /her/ daughter/

;)

11:25:13 marsh | they/it

i wish i slept at midnight lol i always drag it till 3am

11:24:54 She /her/ daughter/

IK right

11:24:24 marsh | they/it

midnight is a perfectly good sleeping time in my opinion

11:23:35 She /her/ daughter/

Playing beetle

11:22:26 She /her/ daughter/

Hello Chat

11:21:55

Hi forest

11:21:46 She /her/ daughter/

Hello

11:20:10 She /her/ daughter/

My time it is 10:20 now

11:19:15 She /her/ daughter/

I am in bed and bored I don't fall asleep until like 12:00

11:14:07 Reaper / Grim

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I bet they'll do well, absolutely love them :3

11:13:08

Reaper
I've set up the chaos now lol let's see how they do the poll was mostly between 50 and 100

11:11:34 Reaper / Grim

Thanks Cap :3

11:11:09 Space Pirate Captain

Grim

I'd say the auctions work just fine.

11:10:38 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- dose this make sense ? as I have never done Genderflux before for an charature and want to make sure its accurate pm me or comment

11:10:26 Reaper / Grim

I'm trying to decide if I should keep doing these as auctions or have them be set price adopts

11:10:11

Skilow
Ah not familiar with MMC so nope lol

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April 8, 2018 11:06 PM

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Heyo, so I need some critique on this ref sheet, I’ll be transferring it to a digital one soon. Please give some helpful hints, it’s greatl appreciated! Thanks!

https://image.ibb.co/f23q2H/03_C94_DF5_C542_427_A_A5_F3_164893_C2_C50_B.jpg

Edited at April 8, 2018 11:07 PM by Deja Vu

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April 8, 2018 11:10 PM

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Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, Ill add a mouth section

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April 8, 2018 11:11 PM

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Deja Vu said:

Enigma~Of~Fate said:
Don't most reference sheets have tongue color? If not, sorry :L

They do! Thanks, I’ll add a mouth section

No problem :)

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April 8, 2018 11:13 PM

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not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.

besides that; i like it

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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hell above said:
not trying to nitpick or anything; but the eyes do seem a bit small and the ears a bit wide.
besides that; i like it

Thanks ! Ill change that ^^

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April 8, 2018 11:14 PM

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you could add to the side the colors that you used.

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April 8, 2018 11:21 PM

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Lunar Moon said:
you could add to the side the colors that you used.

Thanks!

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April 8, 2018 11:33 PM

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The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

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April 9, 2018 12:52 AM

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Deer said:
The back legs bend a bit weird, but that's the only thing that really stands out to me. :)

Oof, I see that now. Thanks!

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