Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

09:04:42 Mad Scientist

Boing,
For lack of better wording... Currently my cousin is in my care while my aunt and uncle get a divorce.

09:04:32 Rook

I think it may be impossible to get HW pups from this pairing. Dad is 149lbs but mom is only 73 D:

09:04:12 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dove
>.>
you alright? Life does that sometimes but ick-

Dealership
;-; Why are y'all shirtless now
Yutaka is shirtless because his shirt has one big oil stain on it, y'all are doing it for the funsies

09:03:59 Reaper / Grim

Cyber
You can always come join us, it's pretty much art and rp for fun. We're incredibly goofy

09:03:14 Rook

More duds :p
But all their pups have been heroes so far, so that's good at least.

09:03:11 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
Better question is why I'm not teaching myself how to draw Mylo shirtless to add to the roster

09:02:40 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Cyber
You could always join lol
It's pretty open-door I believe

Winter Rose

09:02:38 Rose/wints

woooo. I won decor to put on my fav girl.

-WP Click-

09:02:35 Mad Scientist

Boing,
Life hit me like a mack truck.

Aziel

09:02:26 Az,Dio,Rosc

-Click-

I need to get art for this guy for sure

09:01:52 Cyber / Onion

I love hearing the random no-context updates of hte Space Pirate thread in chat

they are always funny xD

09:01:21 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealership
Yeah I know right xD
Convenience
What's going on with the shirtless men in the space dragons though ;-;

Dove
I haven't seen you on in a few days lol
you alright?

09:01:19 Cyber / Onion

Knocking on wood! :3

09:00:12 Rook

I'm about to do the 3rd litter I hope you're right xD

08:59:43 Cyber / Onion

Sabbath

Imma put a bet in for the 3rd litter xD wishing you luck!

08:59:08 Mad Scientist

Hey Boing.

08:59:03 Rook

Place your bets on how many tries it'll take my new alpha pair to give me a good pup. Took my last pair like 13 litters x.x

08:58:43 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
See, convenience

08:58:32 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dove!! :D

08:58:17 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealership
That is true
Then again I could also just annoy you here :D

Kneecap stealer, absolutely
I'm just seeing which one will I bring out in Explore and which one's going to rot in my den for their entire life

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09:04:42 Mad Scientist

Boing,
For lack of better wording... Currently my cousin is in my care while my aunt and uncle get a divorce.

09:04:32 Rook

I think it may be impossible to get HW pups from this pairing. Dad is 149lbs but mom is only 73 D:

09:04:12 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

09:03:59 Reaper / Grim

Cyber
You can always come join us, it's pretty much art and rp for fun. We're incredibly goofy

09:03:14 Rook

More duds :p
But all their pups have been heroes so far, so that's good at least.

09:03:11 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
Better question is why I'm not teaching myself how to draw Mylo shirtless to add to the roster

09:02:40 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Cyber
You could always join lol
It's pretty open-door I believe

Winter Rose

09:02:38 Rose/wints

woooo. I won decor to put on my fav girl.

-WP Click-

09:02:35 Mad Scientist

Boing,
Life hit me like a mack truck.

Aziel

09:02:26 Az,Dio,Rosc

-Click-

I need to get art for this guy for sure

09:01:52 Cyber / Onion

I love hearing the random no-context updates of hte Space Pirate thread in chat

they are always funny xD

09:01:21 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dealership
Yeah I know right xD
Convenience
What's going on with the shirtless men in the space dragons though ;-;

Dove
I haven't seen you on in a few days lol
you alright?

09:01:19 Cyber / Onion

Knocking on wood! :3

09:00:12 Rook

I'm about to do the 3rd litter I hope you're right xD

08:59:43 Cyber / Onion

Sabbath

Imma put a bet in for the 3rd litter xD wishing you luck!

08:59:08 Mad Scientist

Hey Boing.

08:59:03 Rook

Place your bets on how many tries it'll take my new alpha pair to give me a good pup. Took my last pair like 13 litters x.x

08:58:43 Reaper / Grim

Spare Parts
See, convenience

08:58:32 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Dove!! :D

08:58:17 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM