Wolf Play : Critique?

05:02:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Eh...46 and 42

05:00:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cries
Okay i will try that XD
I never apple razed a wolf before

04:57:30 Sorrowful Howls

@amy i would apple rate your fav wolf of the two and if u can then afford it, then rate the other one

i onl apple rate keepers who have other good values

04:56:57 Sorrowful Howls

@enigma yea i work with kids IRL and sometimes I am amazed at their big hearts and other times im horrified...

04:54:45 Amy/Anpmygdala

O have 2 ExW
Do i apple rate them or just guess which one to go with

04:52:13

Just broke down crying over this video :') Kids are so freaking cruel. I'm glad I am returning to bugs as an adult though
-YT Click-

04:43:22 Sorrowful Howls

@enigma awe thanks! and thanks that would make sense

04:24:05

Welcome back Cries <3 no it does not. Sometimes I think it's an indicator of how heavy your pup is, I notice thick build wolves tend to be HW

04:22:53 Sorrowful Howls

hey yalls

this build type is another update i missed xd, does it do anything to your wolves? or just for rp stuff and such

04:18:13

Thank you! Usually my luck in WP is ass xD Nice to see the opposite

04:06:55 Cat

Congrats!

04:06:17

Enigma
ooh congrats! G1 SV is huge :o

04:05:01

Holy shit. This is the very first time I've seen a boost in party, wished for it to be a particular boost, and it turning out to be it. Wow.
-WP Click-

03:41:44 Cat

I came across 5... my wolves only got 1 xD

03:41:03

2 jasmines?? I want that quest dang.

Though my wolves would get destroyed by elephants in their current state xD Maybe some more training first lol

03:26:17 Cat

-WP Click-

02:53:18 Cat

Defeat 10 Elephants in battle. (jungle)

Completed: 0/10

For 1k mush 10 tokens a 2 jasmines....you have a deal xD

02:48:50 Cat

I'm glad she went to a great home <3

02:37:04 Sorrowful Howls

-WP Click-

noice an SV x Chim, one of my dream combos

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05:02:20 Amy/Anpmygdala

Eh...46 and 42

05:00:33 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cries
Okay i will try that XD
I never apple razed a wolf before

04:57:30 Sorrowful Howls

@amy i would apple rate your fav wolf of the two and if u can then afford it, then rate the other one

i onl apple rate keepers who have other good values

04:56:57 Sorrowful Howls

@enigma yea i work with kids IRL and sometimes I am amazed at their big hearts and other times im horrified...

04:54:45 Amy/Anpmygdala

O have 2 ExW
Do i apple rate them or just guess which one to go with

04:52:13

Just broke down crying over this video :') Kids are so freaking cruel. I'm glad I am returning to bugs as an adult though
-YT Click-

04:43:22 Sorrowful Howls

@enigma awe thanks! and thanks that would make sense

04:24:05

Welcome back Cries <3 no it does not. Sometimes I think it's an indicator of how heavy your pup is, I notice thick build wolves tend to be HW

04:22:53 Sorrowful Howls

hey yalls

this build type is another update i missed xd, does it do anything to your wolves? or just for rp stuff and such

04:18:13

Thank you! Usually my luck in WP is ass xD Nice to see the opposite

04:06:55 Cat

Congrats!

04:06:17

Enigma
ooh congrats! G1 SV is huge :o

04:05:01

Holy shit. This is the very first time I've seen a boost in party, wished for it to be a particular boost, and it turning out to be it. Wow.
-WP Click-

03:41:44 Cat

I came across 5... my wolves only got 1 xD

03:41:03

2 jasmines?? I want that quest dang.

Though my wolves would get destroyed by elephants in their current state xD Maybe some more training first lol

03:26:17 Cat

-WP Click-

02:53:18 Cat

Defeat 10 Elephants in battle. (jungle)

Completed: 0/10

For 1k mush 10 tokens a 2 jasmines....you have a deal xD

02:48:50 Cat

I'm glad she went to a great home <3

02:37:04 Sorrowful Howls

-WP Click-

noice an SV x Chim, one of my dream combos

VioletEcho

02:12:23 Is a dinosaur rawr

Morning ET

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM