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 Zeraphia
11:55:24 Space Pirate Captain
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Thoughts on this design?
Any adjusts y'all would make?
 Demon Mistress
11:55:05 The Scary Mod
Heya!
 Chat
11:47:45 
Geez why is fennel 650 mush?!
 Continental Wolves
11:42:15 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Just set up the incubator, I cant wait to have chicks at the end of the month :3
 Kháos
11:41:58 
Guys- it happened. No more old layout for me. The Friends List page is updated now 😭
 StarLitMoonShine
11:41:02 
wolf for sale mela
 Existence
11:40:48 Exist / Kuskyn
Fighting my no energy brain to draw this lineart so I have my new boy
 Collar
11:36:48 poggers aura
Woahgg, almost to 160 paws! that's so crazy
 Winter Rose
11:31:38 Rose/wints
cat, thanks
 Catori
11:31:07 Cat
Wyrm elixir
 Winter Rose
11:28:16 Rose/wints
how do you cure a poisoned wolf?
 Sikoa
11:07:38 
Beautiful art work!
 Catori
11:03:23 Cat
70 mush for an excellent rater sword of freyer + 25 mush for killing the creature.... not a bad payout :P
 Zeraphia
11:01:46 Space Pirate Captain
Dusk

That's gorgeous!
 HighSociety
11:00:43 Dusk (she/her)
thank you :3
 Eternitys Gaze
10:59:23 tern / gaze
dusk
thats so pretty!
 Catori
10:59:05 Cat
Stunning
 HighSociety
10:57:29 Dusk (she/her)
-Click-
do you guys like this?
 Catori
10:48:22 Cat
Sad how some creatures don't give you event Currency
 Existence
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Chat I have a 1G Chimera and now a 2G Chimera

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 Zeraphia
11:55:24 Space Pirate Captain
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Thoughts on this design?
Any adjusts y'all would make?
 Demon Mistress
11:55:05 The Scary Mod
Heya!
 Chat
11:47:45 
Geez why is fennel 650 mush?!
 Continental Wolves
11:42:15 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Just set up the incubator, I cant wait to have chicks at the end of the month :3
 Kháos
11:41:58 
Guys- it happened. No more old layout for me. The Friends List page is updated now 😭
 StarLitMoonShine
11:41:02 
wolf for sale mela
 Existence
11:40:48 Exist / Kuskyn
Fighting my no energy brain to draw this lineart so I have my new boy
 Collar
11:36:48 poggers aura
Woahgg, almost to 160 paws! that's so crazy
 Winter Rose
11:31:38 Rose/wints
cat, thanks
 Catori
11:31:07 Cat
Wyrm elixir
 Winter Rose
11:28:16 Rose/wints
how do you cure a poisoned wolf?
 Sikoa
11:07:38 
Beautiful art work!
 Catori
11:03:23 Cat
70 mush for an excellent rater sword of freyer + 25 mush for killing the creature.... not a bad payout :P
 Zeraphia
11:01:46 Space Pirate Captain
Dusk

That's gorgeous!
 HighSociety
11:00:43 Dusk (she/her)
thank you :3
 Eternitys Gaze
10:59:23 tern / gaze
dusk
thats so pretty!
 Catori
10:59:05 Cat
Stunning
 HighSociety
10:57:29 Dusk (she/her)
-Click-
do you guys like this?
 Catori
10:48:22 Cat
Sad how some creatures don't give you event Currency
 Existence
10:46:30 Exist / Kuskyn
Chat I have a 1G Chimera and now a 2G Chimera




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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