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I refuse to ask people to do anything unless it's for a project or if I'm throwing mush at them

11:54:34 Stray, LT | H/H

Kryuk,

You could have asked me to do it - ^^"

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Daze
:D Dont ask me to write things ever again XD

Continental Wolves

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e,e

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Kryuk,

Fuck. Yes.

11:49:29 Reaper / Grim

Cap
:') Guess so

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Grim

You'll have to post it again tomorrow XD

11:47:08 Reaper / Grim

Now I better not have made these things for nothing XD

11:44:47 Reaper / Grim

My bubble letter handwriting may be shit but the crayon turned out good! :D

11:44:01 Space Pirate Captain

XDD

Those are iconic--

11:43:37 Reaper / Grim

Alright! Team badges are done!

Red
-Click-
Blue
-Click-

11:28:30 Space Pirate Captain

Dusk

Oh nice! The colors are cool

11:17:12 Dusk (she/her)

i finished my banner :)
-Click-

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Reaper
I have my sources e.e

Okay gotta head to work now

Bye guys

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Amy
:O How did you know?!

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Reaper
I am imagining a minion from despicable me dressed as a reaper now lol

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Daze
It ate EVERYTHING! I have never seen something do that before

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Nux
It's okay, he's wormed his way into my ads XD

Not quite, I'm more of a minion, a reaper isn't a god but I appreciate the sentiment ;)

11:08:34 Stray, LT | H/H

Oh my lordy, the cheese monster

11:07:23 You're just yellow

Reaper

You are a god o.o

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animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 10:41 AM

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday

Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/

i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus

animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 05:29 PM

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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!

Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea

animation/timing help/ criticism needed

June 8, 2023 06:35 PM

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!

i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.

Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.

thank you for your advice! ^^

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