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10:44:27 Space Pirate Captain

Spirit

You're so welcome XD

If only I could save myself... I am out of art ideas--

Vox

What a mood though--

10:43:45 🌪️

Spirit-
Why is she mad???

10:43:35 🌪️

At least you just completely forgot the l and didn't put and i instead

10:43:00 Mr Palette Guy

Vah,
You've saved me once again.

Khaos, my dog won't come cuddle she's mad at me ;-;

10:42:21 Jaybe or Jaybe not

crying over the fact that i spelled "doodle" wrong. i literally forgot the "L".

That should be my sign to go to bed lmao

10:41:40 Space Pirate Captain

Spirit

You could turn on Grim's playlist and see if that helps?

10:40:26 🌪️

I would smack you, but I'm cuddling puppies right now so my hands are full.

10:40:16

Wanna Rp? Pm me!

10:33:08 Mr Palette Guy

Geez someone smack me on the head lmao I seriously need to get to work on some palettes-

garfield enjoyer

10:28:28 garf

Any name suggestions for him?

-WP Click-

10:23:13

Morning Violet

10:22:56 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Morning violet

10:21:12 Is a dinosaur rawr

Morning chat

10:19:59

Getting so far in American schooling that you have to learn a different measurement system just to record accurate data

10:13:28 ace <3

im horribly bored

09:54:46 Space Pirate Captain

>.>

-Click-

I should doodle him... but I have no ideas--

09:53:30 Space Pirate Captain

Fei

Ooh that's true. You did find it!

09:52:42 Pack of Sharp Snap

Zera
At least I found what I was looking for in the end even if I walked past it several times

09:52:20 Space Pirate Captain

Never

Oooh that sounds like fun. Aside from the waiting part--

09:51:53 Never/Nev

Vah

I am having breakfast with a friend and run some errands. Then we'll have to wait until my roommate is done at work before heading home

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10:44:27 Space Pirate Captain

Spirit

You're so welcome XD

If only I could save myself... I am out of art ideas--

Vox

What a mood though--

10:43:45 🌪️

Spirit-
Why is she mad???

10:43:35 🌪️

At least you just completely forgot the l and didn't put and i instead

10:43:00 Mr Palette Guy

Vah,
You've saved me once again.

Khaos, my dog won't come cuddle she's mad at me ;-;

10:42:21 Jaybe or Jaybe not

crying over the fact that i spelled "doodle" wrong. i literally forgot the "L".

That should be my sign to go to bed lmao

10:41:40 Space Pirate Captain

Spirit

You could turn on Grim's playlist and see if that helps?

10:40:26 🌪️

I would smack you, but I'm cuddling puppies right now so my hands are full.

10:40:16

Wanna Rp? Pm me!

10:33:08 Mr Palette Guy

Geez someone smack me on the head lmao I seriously need to get to work on some palettes-

garfield enjoyer

10:28:28 garf

Any name suggestions for him?

-WP Click-

10:23:13

Morning Violet

10:22:56 Boe is a bear, Rawr!

Morning violet

10:21:12 Is a dinosaur rawr

Morning chat

10:19:59

Getting so far in American schooling that you have to learn a different measurement system just to record accurate data

10:13:28 ace <3

im horribly bored

09:54:46 Space Pirate Captain

>.>

-Click-

I should doodle him... but I have no ideas--

09:53:30 Space Pirate Captain

Fei

Ooh that's true. You did find it!

09:52:42 Pack of Sharp Snap

Zera
At least I found what I was looking for in the end even if I walked past it several times

09:52:20 Space Pirate Captain

Never

Oooh that sounds like fun. Aside from the waiting part--

09:51:53 Never/Nev

Vah

I am having breakfast with a friend and run some errands. Then we'll have to wait until my roommate is done at work before heading home

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

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June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

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June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

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June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

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June 25, 2019 06:56 PM

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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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