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08:45:16

desti!!

08:44:22

Salem - Thank you!

08:44:21 Salem but pink

Didnt mean to say I think twice lol

08:44:02 Salem but pink

You can only find out if its HW once they're 3 I think, or the trading post and putting in their wolf number and testing 130+ I think

Destinations End

08:42:15 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

08:41:43

If a pup weighs more than 1 pound when it's first born, does that mean it's a Heavy Weight?

08:27:03 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Cave,
What kind

The cave of rejects

08:22:30

Chat anyone up for a pm rp?

08:14:48 Salem but pink

A couple more votes would be cool :3
-WP Click-

08:14:32 DG

Congrats Dusk! A win is a win!

08:07:37 Blue, Dusk

-WP Click-

Probably pointless to others , but i love that i won :D

07:50:11 Pack of Sharp Snap

DarkGold
the bird watcher in forest is the same

07:49:30 Pack of Sharp Snap

I'm making my step sister a gift

07:48:03 DG

the bird watcher in the jungle is real confident lately >.>

07:43:56 Pack of Sharp Snap

Poll
-WP Click-

07:19:57 Is a dinosaur rawr

Jack almost there
Lmao that was me awhile ago except everything was 0 XD

07:18:45 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 438
Mushrooms Saved: 0

getting closer to 10k mush

07:18:19 Is a dinosaur rawr

I know there's healing potions you can buy from thr marketplace

07:18:13 Echo | (They/She/He)

Violet
Yeah good game

07:17:53 Is a dinosaur rawr

Good game Echo...I think it was you ^^

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08:45:16

desti!!

08:44:22

Salem - Thank you!

08:44:21 Salem but pink

Didnt mean to say I think twice lol

08:44:02 Salem but pink

You can only find out if its HW once they're 3 I think, or the trading post and putting in their wolf number and testing 130+ I think

Destinations End

08:42:15 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hey

08:41:43

If a pup weighs more than 1 pound when it's first born, does that mean it's a Heavy Weight?

08:27:03 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Cave,
What kind

The cave of rejects

08:22:30

Chat anyone up for a pm rp?

08:14:48 Salem but pink

A couple more votes would be cool :3
-WP Click-

08:14:32 DG

Congrats Dusk! A win is a win!

08:07:37 Blue, Dusk

-WP Click-

Probably pointless to others , but i love that i won :D

07:50:11 Pack of Sharp Snap

DarkGold
the bird watcher in forest is the same

07:49:30 Pack of Sharp Snap

I'm making my step sister a gift

07:48:03 DG

the bird watcher in the jungle is real confident lately >.>

07:43:56 Pack of Sharp Snap

Poll
-WP Click-

07:19:57 Is a dinosaur rawr

Jack almost there
Lmao that was me awhile ago except everything was 0 XD

07:18:45 Jack, Boo, Vapor

Apples: 0
Apples Saved: 0
Mushrooms: 438
Mushrooms Saved: 0

getting closer to 10k mush

07:18:19 Is a dinosaur rawr

I know there's healing potions you can buy from thr marketplace

07:18:13 Echo | (They/She/He)

Violet
Yeah good game

07:17:53 Is a dinosaur rawr

Good game Echo...I think it was you ^^

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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