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04:50:56 marsh | they/it

how do you code
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04:46:35 Flame | Celeste

Ohh thanks :D

04:45:39 marsh | they/it

stagger the dominance lol

04:44:18 Flame | Celeste

Does anyone have any idea why my pack happiness is only 15? Everyoneâs in green for food and water, and all my wolves are good or excellent affinity except 2 that are âOkâ :âD

04:21:09 ECIFIRCAS

You *chose* to be a bio major? Thoughts and prayers...

Enigma

04:18:56

Someone please tell me why I decided to add a bio major. I forgot how crazy the STEM field is

Urux

04:00:47 Urox, Uris

Eek sorry I was driving haha
So he was a wild card chimera! That makes it even better!

03:19:16 Cat

Hahahaha

03:18:45 ECIFIRCAS

"Trying to breed BJake" is all I read. I think it's time to go to sleep.

03:04:40 Cat

Rip...just forgot to use my passionflower in the Breeding and popped out an Albino finally but has a negative vital.
(Trying to breed Bjake a low gen HW hero albino)

03:01:24 Cat

I'm so happy about him. He is the first ever chim I have ever bred... and it was the time I was aiming for an Albino lol

Urux

02:59:11 Urox, Uris

Ooo a chim! I do love a nicely customed chim haha
I will have to have a look at gear when im actually at home

02:55:48 Cat

I'm going to go through the same problem.
This is my fresh custom and need to sort some gear xD
-WP Click-

Urux

02:54:49 Urox, Uris

Nowâ¦what gear lol

02:54:24 Cat

Woohoo!!

Urux

02:46:38 Urox, Uris

I have been wanting to use that design for ages lol

02:46:04 marsh | they/it

bro got doh!'ed

Urux

02:44:30 Urox, Uris

-WP Click-
He exists

Urux

02:42:28 Urox, Uris

:0 it was saying 46, I change the pelt to white and its 47 make it make sense lol

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04:50:56 marsh | they/it

how do you code
-Click-

04:46:35 Flame | Celeste

Ohh thanks :D

04:45:39 marsh | they/it

stagger the dominance lol

04:44:18 Flame | Celeste

Does anyone have any idea why my pack happiness is only 15? Everyoneâs in green for food and water, and all my wolves are good or excellent affinity except 2 that are âOkâ :âD

04:21:09 ECIFIRCAS

You *chose* to be a bio major? Thoughts and prayers...

Enigma

04:18:56

Someone please tell me why I decided to add a bio major. I forgot how crazy the STEM field is

Urux

04:00:47 Urox, Uris

Eek sorry I was driving haha
So he was a wild card chimera! That makes it even better!

03:19:16 Cat

Hahahaha

03:18:45 ECIFIRCAS

"Trying to breed BJake" is all I read. I think it's time to go to sleep.

03:04:40 Cat

Rip...just forgot to use my passionflower in the Breeding and popped out an Albino finally but has a negative vital.
(Trying to breed Bjake a low gen HW hero albino)

03:01:24 Cat

I'm so happy about him. He is the first ever chim I have ever bred... and it was the time I was aiming for an Albino lol

Urux

02:59:11 Urox, Uris

Ooo a chim! I do love a nicely customed chim haha
I will have to have a look at gear when im actually at home

02:55:48 Cat

I'm going to go through the same problem.
This is my fresh custom and need to sort some gear xD
-WP Click-

Urux

02:54:49 Urox, Uris

Nowâ¦what gear lol

02:54:24 Cat

Woohoo!!

Urux

02:46:38 Urox, Uris

I have been wanting to use that design for ages lol

02:46:04 marsh | they/it

bro got doh!'ed

Urux

02:44:30 Urox, Uris

-WP Click-
He exists

Urux

02:42:28 Urox, Uris

:0 it was saying 46, I change the pelt to white and its 47 make it make sense lol

02:41:55 marsh | they/it

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM