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 Anatolian Shepherd
01:47:37 Zombified Breyer
@Nevermore
Brown walla? Ew. Our whole place is white with light brown trim. It makes me feel like I'm in a padded room sometimes lol we only have two pictures up.

This weekend I at least want to get two bedside tables since we are using chairs to have our phones on at night.
 Nevermore.
01:44:43 Never/Nev
Mag! :D

Anatolian
Haha, trust me. I swore that by seven month's I'd have the whole place painted.. Still have the baby poo brown walls.

If it makes you feel better, all of the bedrooms just have a bed and perhaps something to put clothes on. You've got this! It'll be worth it once it's done! :D
 Anatolian Shepherd
01:44:15 Zombified Breyer
@Mag
Hey, how are you?
 Magnus Bane
01:43:10 Mag/Maggy
Heyo
 \\ Akari Ahava //
01:41:59 
Thanks!
 Anatolian Shepherd
01:41:52 Zombified Breyer
@Nevermore
Oh my gosh that's great. I thought I was bad for not unpacking for 7 months xD

There's still three half walk in closets go go through. We have no furniture in our room except for our bed and cat trees. It bothers me now that I got the boxes out.
 SweetTea
01:41:36 Sweet,Tea (he,him)
ahh yes got to love a random panic attack that hits for 0 reason
 Caeruleum
01:41:32 Cae, Blue
sell it to grandma in explore for one coin
 \\ Akari Ahava //
01:40:38 
What does the golden wolf figurine do does anyone know?
 Nevermore.
01:39:32 Never/Nev
Hades

I'm planning on moving next year so why bother at this point lmao

I still have shit at my mother's place and in a storage box. I really need to downsize apparently.

I at least unpacked my things from my recent travels since my favorite breeches were in there.
 Hades
01:37:59 The OG Ecifircas
Nevermore., you're so me. I still haven't unpacked some stuff from vacation around this time last year. Oof.
 Nevermore.
01:37:15 Never/Nev
Anatolian
It's a great start!

I have been living in the same house for three years come Thanksgiving weekend and I still haven't unpacked :")
 Leaves Beware
01:36:11 Leaf she/her
Sweet Gave Paws To Your Whole Pack!
 Anatolian Shepherd
01:35:43 Zombified Breyer
I'm exhausted now. Me and my boyfriend have lived in our new place for almost 7 months now and we never fully unpacked. I just unpacked the handful of large boxes in our room and moved the cat trees around lol. Also put away my two extra cages from when I owned rats.
 Caeruleum
01:35:20 Cae, Blue
☣ Aya tail slaps Dreki 1 and kills them.
☣ Aya has leveled up their battle skills!

girlie kicking ass with her 24 damage XD
 SweetTea
01:35:16 Sweet,Tea (he,him)
Rip had to rename one my new wolves cause I already had one with that name XD
 Leaves Beware
01:34:41 Leaf she/her
Ceylon Tea Sweet is very pretty!
 Leaves Beware
01:33:26 Leaf she/her
Sweet what are their Names I wanna give them all paws!
 SweetTea
01:32:33 Sweet,Tea (he,him)
just bought and named 4 new wolves for my pack
 Caeruleum
01:32:33 Cae, Blue
fair enough

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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


Ciao

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 4519
#2765951
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

IMG-1637.jpg

Colored final product

IMG-1636.jpg

Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


vixven

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


Ciao

Darkseeker
 
Posts: 4519
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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