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 Tonneoshet
09:11:19 Tony - Neo - Bug
@Boe
Something like that yeah
 Boeing
09:10:53 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Ghost
us in the south have 32% more land mass than y'all in the north
and wasn't the maui legend that south island was his waka and the north was the stingray thing?
 Werewolf
09:10:35 Lycan, My can
Anyone up for a human or shifter romance pm role play?
 Castiel
09:10:27 Cas (He/They)
Samael

I'm a crazy guy according to most people I take it as a complement

New Zealand seems like a cool place
 Tonneoshet
09:10:24 Tony - Neo - Bug
I would make the kiwi alliance but I already have Aurum Manor. Which I think is close to being second biggest on here?
 Broken Archangel
09:10:08 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Cas we will still take you 😁
 Broken Archangel
09:09:42 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Emmet ok XD

Boe were nit that bad XD
 Castiel
09:09:16 Cas (He/They)
*and I'm gay

it cut off part my sentence
 Tonneoshet
09:09:14 Tony - Neo - Bug
Imagine not /j
 Broken Archangel
09:09:11 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Tony I'm in the winterless north XD
 Continental Wolves
09:09:08 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
Broken
Ill live in Boo's closet, you can have my duffle bag 😌
 Boeing
09:08:57 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
imagine living in the north island >.> (/j)
 Broken Archangel
09:08:50 Samael, Fallen, Arch
Cas I'm sure you can fit in new Zealand XD
 Tonneoshet
09:08:31 Tony - Neo - Bug
I have the joys of being central. Got a lake, mountains and plenty of walks around :>

Very beautiful here indeed
 Castiel
09:08:13 Cas (He/They)
just realized I don't think I'd fit in an any country I don't even fit in the US people think I'm weird cause in a Goth Redneck who also is Emo and Punk XD and
 Broken Archangel
09:07:55 Samael, Fallen, Arch
I'd make one but I'd have to get rid of one of my current alliance but I'm nit that keen in leading an alliance XDx

Emmet where are you taking me XD
 Magnus Bane
09:07:43 Mag/Maggy
>.>
 Boo
09:07:32 Chrissy
can i steal emmet?
 Boeing
09:07:30 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
wait what did I do XD
 Boeing
09:07:10 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Tonneo
Hey it's fine xD
My list of kiwis here is 8 people long, we can get another one

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Constructive Criticism on human art?April 4, 2021 09:25 PM


Luck

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Posts: 3575
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Heyo! I just recently got into drawing human art, since before now I've only drawn feral animals and furries :)
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I have a W.I.P peice of one of my human characters that I think looks really good, but you guys are much better artists than I'll ever be, so I'd like to hear your opinions on it! ^^ (post images isn't being the best right now so you'll have to click the link to see it :<)

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Edited at April 4, 2021 09:26 PM by Toby
Constructive Criticism on human art?April 6, 2021 09:52 AM


Zeraphia

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It does look pretty good, the coloring is solid, the anatomy is pretty much all there. It's a wonderful chibi-type style. If I were to adjust anything really, it'd be to make the glasses / goggles either a bit bigger (a little more cartoonishI guess lol) to help the eyes be a bit more visible. But that's just a personal preference.
Constructive Criticism on human art?May 10, 2021 02:49 AM


Former Pack

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I like that you have a strong direction for your personal style.
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The thing that throws me is the angles. The best way that I can explain this is by showing, so I took your drawing, lowered the opacity, and drew on the centerlines. Everything except the face is viewed straight on. The face, based on where the eyes are (and the bridge of the glasses), is turned. But the other facial features, ears, hair, and hair bow don't turn with the head.
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Edited at May 10, 2021 02:50 AM by Barlow

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