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 Feiella
10:42:12 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
it looks great Bjake
 Kingwolf
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Dogs with powers rp anyone? Pm me, please be able to play male
 Feiella
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Bjake
ah I see now
 ataciara
10:36:40 ciara
one step closer to my call of duty cosplay, got my mask in last night

just waiting for my next check to get my tactical gear i'm so STOKED

good morning how're yall
 BellJake
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@Feiella
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Probably easier to see with this one :'D
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Good morning !!
 Feiella
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Bjake
really? It looks like it is flying or falling
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LOL*
 Feiella
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Twilight sniffs under a bush and finds Roll Of Plastic!

thanks. I'll add it to my collection of oil lamp, sword pieces and shard of pottery
 BellJake
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@Feiella
LOl, The canine's actually just lying in snow :3
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10:30:32 Rogue is a Ghost
lol
 Feiella
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Rogue
Absolutely nothing :D
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Leopard Pounce follows Silent Feather on a patrol.

Stats: Stealth +3
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two pups out on their own. What could go wrong?
 Feiella
10:28:02 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
ooh flying canine
 BellJake
10:26:22 Don't call me BJ.
YCH*
 BellJake
10:26:13 Don't call me BJ.
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Finished up a commission, thoughts?
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Anatolian
Believe it or not college is a breeze it's just being sleepy after its information overload , university will be worse
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@Winterfell
I have technically been here since 2016 but my first account got deleted. I never went to college but I hear it's a lot of work and very tiring. I don't blame you for forgetting about this game.
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Anatolian
I've been here since 2015 n absolutely love it but i just don't have the time anymore with college and expecting , adulthood really isn't the high life xD
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@Winterfell
I understand that. I have taken many hiatus on this game but it seems to always pull me back.

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


Vennenum

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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And the eyes are a little small

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