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07:46:19 Toliska, Desti, Coy
@Feiella
I personally would love a ferret with all my heart. But my parents are still ver my much a deadset hard absolutely no to that.
My lap buddy will be a Shih Tzu, (toy) Shih Poo or a different Shih Tzu mix. Most likely the second or first of those though. It won't happen until Bear is gone either because we wouldn't be able to manage four dogs again. It's going to be trained as my service dog once I get the pup
 Feiella
07:46:04 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Nightwood
Living a chaotic life and I've become a bed now
 Urux
07:45:17 Urox, Uris
-Click-
So close to finishing :')
 Apothecary
07:44:35 Medicinally Autistic
Nah, burn the whole building down boeing. It's the best choice.
 Boeing
07:44:10 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Apothecary
e.e
just... I don't know. But I'd reccommend thinking it through a bit. like I get your reaction, it's understandable-
damn, I don't know though :')
 Nightwood
07:43:47 Woods, Woody (he/ th
Feiella,

I'm doing alright, how are you?
 Feiella
07:42:51 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Nightwood
how are you?
 Apothecary
07:42:47 Medicinally Autistic
Y'all can't keep scaring me like this.
 Apothecary
07:42:36 Medicinally Autistic
And more sales in main chat making me think I'm in the wrong chat.
 Feiella
07:42:25 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Forest whisp
Please take it to sales chat
 Apothecary
07:41:42 Medicinally Autistic
Anyway, off to the forest I go, I gotta BE train before going back to mountains tomorrow.
 Nightwood
07:41:25 Woods, Woody (he/ th
Feiella,

Hi! It's been a while ^^
 Apothecary
07:41:10 Medicinally Autistic
Listen. The thought of burning my stuff right now is the only thing keeping me from exploding.
 Feiella
07:40:06 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Nightwood!
 Boeing
07:39:57 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Apothecary
- yeah. I don't know but ack
your reaction isn't wrong. I'd probably do something along those lines too
but don't burn your stuff >.>
 Apothecary
07:39:56 Medicinally Autistic
@Magnus

What would the revenge be?

I mean my revenge was just moving on, but like seriously, this feels gross. dude did not contribute enough to cheat on me in my own apartment.
 Feiella
07:39:08 Fei The Sleepy Ghost
Desti
You will end up with the perfect lap buddy be dog, cat or something else
 Apothecary
07:38:44 Medicinally Autistic
I am gonna go take a bath in acid to get off any remaining germs.
 Forest whisp
07:38:28 She /her/ daughter/
I low-key forgot my password for a second
 Magnus Bane
07:38:22 Mag/Maggy
The way I'd get the best revenge for cheating on me in my own bed:')

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Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 04:08 AM


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Seriously, don't hold back. I want to improve, and the only way to do that it with some good, honest critiques. All are wanted and very much appreciated :)



Link to my art gallery:
https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=26299&page=1

But, if you're lazy like me, here are some of my most recent artworks:
https://i.postimg.cc/5041gScN/Summer-Storm-Raffle.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/C1TJpcMS/Xery-Ref-Sheet.jpg

https://i.postimg.cc/qvrjFbRr/Familiar-Background.jpg


Edited at July 11, 2019 04:14 AM by Wood Carve
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I can give negative feedback. It’s perfect. Maybe draw each individual hair on the Animals? I donÂ’ know.

Edited at July 11, 2019 03:22 PM by CanadianGirl
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:22 PM


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I really like your art! I'd love an avatar from you
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:23 PM


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mara's pack said:
bro what
i tried to come up with some constructive criticism but i cant
your art is so perfect
like the composition, colors, background, everything


Same! My answer stands!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:35 PM


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Your art is pretty good, I especially like the last piece (the gold field).
The main thing that stuck out and- in my opinion- doesn't seem to mesh well with the rest of the piece: is the brightness in color for the wolf(?) in the first image.

I think the only main parts that should be as bright as it is, would be: the back and the beginning of the tail. The rest should be a bit darker, since it would be in the shade.
I did notice that you added shadow around the head/front of the animal, so that's good.
Besides that, I only have two nitpicks:

-The grass along the edges of the trees are a bit too bright as well, just a hint too bright
-The rocks(?) also seem very white, rather than a more grey. That could be the type of rock, I'm unsure, but they really jumped out at me and took some attention away from the animal and fire, which I felt where the main focus points.

Aside from those minor things, again, your art is very beautiful. :)
Keep up the great work!
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:39 PM


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Thank you Mossious <3 I'll keep those in mind for the next thing I draw :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 03:40 PM


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You're welcome and best of luck to you. 8D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:48 PM


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You're a super talented artist, first of all <3

I just want to say that one thing I am SUPER jealous of in your art is your backgrounds and environments. They're just so good and detailed, and pretty, and /gah/. I love em. :'D

One thing I do think that you can improve on, though, is the shading of your characters. It just looks a little too... soft and blended together, and sometimes causes them to blend in a bit too much with the background. I think just a bit more detail in your shading and a bit less smudging would make your art go a loooong way.

One other minor thing I wanted to critique, is that when making ref sheets, try to make the background color a bit more muted. On the sheet of Xery, for example, the red is a bit too bright and blends in with the red of the character, and makes it kind of hard to look at. It might benefit to desaturate the background a little bit, or make it darker/lighter, or even make it a different color entirely that just compliments the character.

That's about all I have to say. Your art is /super/ solid, and I can't wait to see you improve and have your art become more amazing in the future :D
Critique My ArtJuly 11, 2019 07:50 PM


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Thank you Dash!! <3

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