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xD I guess there's some similarities in wierd shoppers everywhere
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Holy crap. 84 gen? Yikes. It's rare I see wolves with that high of a gen. Cute gear for her, though.
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Her gear is complete :) For now.
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Sorry can not spell today.
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Cat I have An Ifat too!
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Plane
Exacly, and complain all the time why it's taking so long
 Boeing
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Amt
Or that one person buying a single loaf of bread could go to the cashier and hold everyone up :')
 Cat Paradise
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I was just letting you know!
 Amygdala
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Plane
Here it's more like small shopings go to self checkout, bigger shopping go to normal rrgister, if everyone stuck to this it would go faster...some people just refuse logic
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Amt
that does not make sense. :P
hehhhhhhhh?
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@Leaf okay?
 Amygdala
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Plane
Here we have normal registers and selfcheckout at the same time, just last time my sister argued with a customer who went to the check out and refused to do anything herself, she demanded my sister does it for her even if she is not allowed too because it's SELFcheckout
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Serpents Lost Sun is Pregnant with my wolf Boris's pups!
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Techno
ah. that makes a bit more sense.

Amt
going into a supermarket here you'll find more self checkouts than cashiers at any point. like... e.e
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03:23:32 Amy/Anpmygdala
Plane
Don't underestimate the stupidity of customers...
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-WP Click- Gear ideas pm me
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Boe

most are old or don't speak english. I work in a home depot so other half the time they are mad the small item they want is locked up.
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the self check-outs in my town(there are 4 total machines within a 1 hour drive) are constantly broken. I like them when they work as intended.
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techno
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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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