Wolf Play : Thoughts/light criticism ?
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 technoblade
05:27:42 Lil Techy | Techno
cres

i'm only on like episode 11 so i have a while cause I was reading Your Throne which is a wild fucking ride
 Amygdala
05:27:29 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
I think i would die if i found a webtoon in slovenian lmao

The only things i read in slovenian are books i have from my grandma like beli očnjak (the white fang) and knjiga o džungli (the jungle book) but it's for adults. It has 2 parts and it's actually really interesting
 Revelry
05:26:56 Rev
Vote? 👀
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 Caeruleum
05:26:53 Cae, Blue
hell yeah! i just got caught up a few days ago myself! :D
 technoblade
05:26:33 Lil Techy | Techno
cres

yup!
 Caeruleum
05:26:07 Cae, Blue
tech, the list of possibilities is way too long but i wanna go with orv?
 Moth
05:25:41 
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what do we think the odds of her giving birth before spring 1 are...
 Caeruleum
05:25:25 Cae, Blue
me asking someone to put their unbred male up every winter 3rd: -Click-
 technoblade
05:25:17 Lil Techy | Techno
cres

speaking of webtoons guess what i'm finally reading/catching up on
 technoblade
05:24:38 Lil Techy | Techno
amy

whoopsie
 Caeruleum
05:23:23 Cae, Blue
cae is good sobs

oh my God that reminds me of the time i found a webtoon translated to croatian... the worst >.<

the only thing i love reading in cro is grička, as it was originally written in croatian ^^
 Amygdala
05:21:31 Amy/Anpmygdala
Cae
Eh....book and book series is the same...if it's interesting enough i am finishing it in a week lol
My best achivement is reading the whole vampire academy in 4 days
 Amygdala
05:20:24 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
Damn you...you stole all my luck for those quests lol
 Amygdala
05:19:59 Amy/Anpmygdala
Should i rather call you cae...and i understand what you mean...soo cringe. I can't even read books in slovenian. English is way better
 technoblade
05:19:26 Lil Techy | Techno
amy

i found the jade monkey first XD
 Caeruleum
05:18:50 Cae, Blue
one more book... series* :D
 Amygdala
05:18:34 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
;-;
 Caeruleum
05:18:23 Cae, Blue
seeing slavic words in english setting is making me cringe so bad, not gonna lie :')
 technoblade
05:18:01 Lil Techy | Techno
amy

i got that one and completed it not long after wheeze!
 Amygdala
05:17:11 Amy/Anpmygdala
Techno
Lol...i spent 10 days looking for a damned jade monkey...i skipped those quests ever since

Plava
It does spund interesting...oh well one more book to add on my list XD

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Thoughts/light criticism ?January 7, 2021 05:54 AM


starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well
done on January 7
done on January 26


done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 12:48 AM


Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).
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I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece
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If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms
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I would make the nostrils a little smaller.
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I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 05:47 AM


starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .
Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything
don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:29 PM


Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD
I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.
that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:42 PM


starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them
thanks for your input ^^

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