Wolf Play : critique needed
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 Red River Wolves
03:33:06 Redd Dead
Amy,
Apparently people have had more luck with ExW x poor pairings. Don't know why though
 DojejeTheWolf
03:31:40 Dojeje
These tabs are confusing
 Amygdala
03:31:31 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd
Lmao

Also how did 2 ExW throw out 2 below average and 1 average pup 🥲
 Red River Wolves
03:30:28 Redd Dead
Amy,
You spend 20k on move. I spend 20k on bronze figs and still have 0 pack happiness. we are not the same.
 Amygdala
03:30:16 Amy/Anpmygdala
Crook
It's fine...i have mush
 Crooked Magic
03:29:41 Crook, She/her
Amy
Dammit it was taken. Just a sec, It'll take me a few moves to get another one from explore.
 Amygdala
03:29:40 Amy/Anpmygdala
2*
 Amygdala
03:29:32 Amy/Anpmygdala
W of the best wrestlers in my pack and this is what i get

Wrestling Rating: Below Average
 Amygdala
03:28:04 Amy/Anpmygdala
Crook
That would help XD

Now let's see what 2 ExW gave me
 Crooked Magic
03:27:01 Crook, She/her
Amy
I think I have a bald eagle feather.
 Amygdala
03:20:03 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd
Well i have 2 days...i need to work again on moday...may the soul of wolf play be with me lol
 Sassy Otaku
03:19:37 Chuuya/Ruggie
I have no actual goals for this FMC
I snagged first for two events last month after all
 DojejeTheWolf
03:19:09 Dojeje
I accidentally tapped the 0 and thought everyone blocked me because no one showed up
 Red River Wolves
03:18:06 Redd Dead
Crook,
lol same. I had like 7 pups and they all aged up

Amy,
Do or do not. There is no try. Either you sell your soul to WP or you don't. No inbetween
 Amygdala
03:17:47 Amy/Anpmygdala
Crook
got you covered XD

Just let me get some mush to rate them...i spent everything i had on moves lmao
 DojejeTheWolf
03:17:34 Dojeje
Actually 3
 Crooked Magic
03:16:55 Crook, She/her
Pov: When you realize you have no pups to wrestle with and were not prepared at all for FMF. Me: *Walks out and starts throwing books at the wall*
 Amygdala
03:16:06 Amy/Anpmygdala
Redd
Maybee if i try hard enough i can reach top 3 or even the top spot :o

My goal is 50k so i get mushies for the boost event
 DojejeTheWolf
03:14:57 Dojeje
It feels like it's been 5 days
 Red River Wolves
03:13:54 Redd Dead
Amy,
I feel like sometime ago Neutrals and Darkseekers just chose violence for the FMC and never looked back. If I remember right, it's been 30k+ lately

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critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:00 AM


Vennenum

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#2141590
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stole my sister's drawing tablet.

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Feel like there's something off about this but I can't put my finger on what...?

*Edit to add: this was based off a lineart.


Edited at June 28, 2020 10:31 PM by Vennenum
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:05 AM


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That's awesome! I'd say the neck maybe arches back a bit too much, the eyes are a little small, has a bit of an underbite and the fur's very line-y but those are such small things i don't think it would really affect the piece- it's really good!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:17 AM


Hallbjorns

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Hmm I see what you mean. Would red lining be alright? I'd love to play around a bit to see what might be giving the off feeling <3
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:29 AM


Vennenum

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Considering I was coloring off a lineart, the only thing I changed were the nose and the eyes.
You're welcome to do a redline, but I'm not confident on my lineart-fixing skills. :')
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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It does look off, but I can't help you on what looks off. It looks great though.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 02:06 PM


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The eye's a tad small, but other than that I think it looks lovely Venn.
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:23 PM


Blizzard's Star

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Smol eyes
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


Former Pack

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The ear looks a little twisted out about halfway up it
The base is facing forwards, but then the tip is facing to the side
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:24 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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Sorry if I seem rude but uh
I think it is that it looks like it's tongue is brown, though it it the lips. But it is an AMAZING DRAWING!
critique neededJune 28, 2020 05:25 PM


The Legendary Wolf

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And the eyes are a little small

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