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07:27:26 marsh | they/it

im genuinely convinced its biome specific i cant be running into moss people 10 times and banshee 0

07:27:12 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

-WP Click- Move ideas Please reate to magic powers or stuff like that

Everlasting Torment

07:26:58 Anubis, Samael

I haven't been in swamp in ages XD

07:25:54 marsh | they/it

oki going to the swamps

07:25:27 ET

I get so much llorona. No idea if it's terrain specific but I explore in swamp and get her all the time.

The Pumpkin King

07:24:58

Yeah, I love the Encyclopedia but when it says 'Found in Mountains' and then 'Findable? No' and then tells me I can only find Mint Seeds on levels 99 and above, I just want to stick with what's tried and true.

07:23:29 marsh | they/it

karma's list does make it easier to search more at once lol

Everlasting Torment

07:22:49 Anubis, Samael

Star I completely forgot about that XD

The Pumpkin King

07:22:33

Real OGs still use this. -WP Click-

Everlasting Torment

07:22:05 Anubis, Samael

Forest hmm ok thanks

07:21:52 marsh | they/it

@Anubis
level 5, encyclopedia is your best friend lol

Forest Dwelling

07:21:47 Wolflocke Challenge

@Anubis

Neither parents are particularly heavy wolves so I'd assume the pup will most likely be between 90 - 100lbs

07:21:20 marsh | they/it

so many grims and baba yaga
never seen banshee or llorona in my life

Everlasting Torment

07:21:07 Anubis, Samael

Where do I find this what level in swamp?
Defeat 5 Anhinga in battle. (swamp)
Completed: 0/5

07:20:28 Amy/Anpmygdala

Marsh
If you have them for a quest you have bad luck lol
I didn't see a single la lorna today and i did 3k moves already🥲

The Pumpkin King

07:20:05

I feel like I get them constantly, what-

I've been in Jungle and Forest, mostly Jungle.

07:18:44 marsh | they/it

is llorona and banshee biome specific or do i just have really bad luck

Everlasting Torment

07:18:13 Anubis, Samael

Can someone weight check this pup XD

-WP Click-

Everlasting Torment

07:17:20 Anubis, Samael

Hmm i might start exploring again XD

07:15:59 Wolf, or Pride

I have never found it so hard to find the hellhounds. Usually I find too many of them. Now I've found only 2 in 1000 explore moves

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June 25, 2019 04:58 PM

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I'm working on a Creature for my Adoptable and I got stuck on the eye mouth and how I should do the feathers on the wings any Advise and Critique would be amazing.

https://i.postimg.cc/nr1Lqhkh/IMG-3236.jpg

((Made by me duh))

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June 25, 2019 05:06 PM

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The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?

- Adjust the stomach and lower it

- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

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June 25, 2019 05:09 PM

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❦Amaris said:
The picture looks kind-of confusing to me, but I will try my best to give some critique!

- Add more of a. . . chest, I guess?
- Adjust the stomach and lower it
- Add the other side limbs (if they are there, I cannot see them >.<)

Thanks it's still a W.I.P so it's gonna be a little confusing.

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June 25, 2019 05:16 PM

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The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

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June 25, 2019 06:56 PM

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Wolffang said:
The maw, or mouth, is a little boxy. Make it a little more narrow, since I can see this is a dragon-like design. Dragons normally have a slender physique, unless you want a bulky one. Then you'd have to shorten the muzzle and make it more broad. The upper.. joints? I dunno the word, but the more upper half of the limbs (arms, legs) are too.. beefy. Make them a little more slender. For the eyes, try something that's like an almond like shape. Eyes are normally almond shaped, in a way. Like an Ellipse, google if you don't know what it is. It's an Earth Science term. This is all I got for now, but as you progress I can add more critiques

Thanks

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