Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

08:42:07 Lurantis

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this folder has some cats I made back when I had an adopt auction

08:40:20 Lurantis

Chat I just saw it on the poll and I am in love :) I'm not that good at coloring

Chat

08:39:33

Did you happen to see the Colored version earlier?

08:38:42 Lurantis

Chat
that's pretty sweet!

Chat

08:37:55

BuggyOs
Yessum eventually, I have a poll trying to figure out pricing for premades of the "normal" ones

Thinking of doing something different for special ones though

08:34:29 Lurantis

Chat
ooh wait I love that--
Do you plan on making adopts or something?

Khaos
a team for what? but yeah thats horrible

Chat

08:32:49

BuggyOs
Played around with the lineart more

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Kháos

08:30:47

Joined a new team two weeks ago, am their third best player... and they just kicked the first best from their team. I left them. Why would you kick your best teammate???

Winter Rose

08:30:18 Rose/wints

i'm back

Wolf Pride

08:29:39 Wolf

Ollie
Your art is always amazing. I have no artistic talent whatsoever. If yoy want a stick figure though, I got you XD

08:26:53 Ollie, Gold

Wait, I fixed the eyes
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Wander, Vah
Thank you! Its been a while since I've drawn or posted anything, but Ive been practicing ^^

08:25:12 Silver (She/her)

*wth

08:23:27 Silver (She/her)

Shade argues with the alphas.
Shade you are a pup with?

08:22:34 marsh | they/it

nah its just locked to guests

Zeraphia

08:22:22 Space Pirate Captain

Ollie

Holy catfish that's gorgeous--the hair?? The shading??

08:22:13 Wander

It's broken star

08:22:03 marsh | they/it

i love him
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08:21:47 Wander

Wow! Is lovely

08:20:54 Ollie, Gold

Thoughts?
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08:42:07 Lurantis

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this folder has some cats I made back when I had an adopt auction

08:40:20 Lurantis

Chat I just saw it on the poll and I am in love :) I'm not that good at coloring

Chat

08:39:33

Did you happen to see the Colored version earlier?

08:38:42 Lurantis

Chat
that's pretty sweet!

Chat

08:37:55

BuggyOs
Yessum eventually, I have a poll trying to figure out pricing for premades of the "normal" ones

Thinking of doing something different for special ones though

08:34:29 Lurantis

Chat
ooh wait I love that--
Do you plan on making adopts or something?

Khaos
a team for what? but yeah thats horrible

Chat

08:32:49

BuggyOs
Played around with the lineart more

-Click-

Kháos

08:30:47

Joined a new team two weeks ago, am their third best player... and they just kicked the first best from their team. I left them. Why would you kick your best teammate???

Winter Rose

08:30:18 Rose/wints

i'm back

Wolf Pride

08:29:39 Wolf

Ollie
Your art is always amazing. I have no artistic talent whatsoever. If yoy want a stick figure though, I got you XD

08:26:53 Ollie, Gold

Wait, I fixed the eyes
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Wander, Vah
Thank you! Its been a while since I've drawn or posted anything, but Ive been practicing ^^

08:25:12 Silver (She/her)

*wth

08:23:27 Silver (She/her)

Shade argues with the alphas.
Shade you are a pup with?

08:22:34 marsh | they/it

nah its just locked to guests

Zeraphia

08:22:22 Space Pirate Captain

Ollie

Holy catfish that's gorgeous--the hair?? The shading??

08:22:13 Wander

It's broken star

08:22:03 marsh | they/it

i love him
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08:21:47 Wander

Wow! Is lovely

08:20:54 Ollie, Gold

Thoughts?
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08:15:25 Lurantis

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

Thought? Post below.

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM