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Shade you are a pup with?
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nah its just locked to guests
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Ollie

Holy catfish that's gorgeous--the hair?? The shading??
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It's broken star
 starmutt
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i love him
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Wow! Is lovely
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forever
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 Foreverdragons23
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how do you get things appraised
 Malcuth
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Haha thank you! She is psycho so calling her "monster" is very fitting
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malcuth

gila monster is the perfect name for them
 Malcuth
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My cat Gila Monster
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hellooo Bjake!
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Hey BJake!
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08:09:43 Don't call me BJ.
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crackers*
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My cat was trying to eat my peanut butter crack earlier
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BuggyOs
Awww

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Will do once she emerges from hiding lol

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 Luna❄
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*wth
 Luna❄
08:23:27 Silver (She/her)
Shade argues with the alphas.
Shade you are a pup with?
 starmutt
08:22:34 marsh | they/it
nah its just locked to guests
 Zeraphia
08:22:22 Space Pirate Captain
Ollie

Holy catfish that's gorgeous--the hair?? The shading??
 Malcuth
08:22:13 Wander
It's broken star
 starmutt
08:22:03 marsh | they/it
i love him
-Click-
 Malcuth
08:21:47 Wander
Wow! Is lovely
 Faulty Demons
08:20:54 Ollie, Gold
Thoughts?
-Click-
 BuggyOs
08:15:25 Lurantis
forever
montak in the marketplace
 Foreverdragons23
08:14:34 
how do you get things appraised
 Malcuth
08:11:37 Wander
Haha thank you! She is psycho so calling her "monster" is very fitting
 BuggyOs
08:11:36 Lurantis
Wander
I love them
 Honey
08:11:13 
malcuth

gila monster is the perfect name for them
 Malcuth
08:10:56 Wander
My cat Gila Monster
-Click-
 BuggyOs
08:10:46 Lurantis
hellooo Bjake!
 Faulty Demons
08:10:43 Ollie, Gold
Hey BJake!
 BJake
08:09:43 Don't call me BJ.
Helloooo people
 BuggyOs
08:07:32 Lurantis
crackers*
 BuggyOs
08:07:26 Lurantis
My cat was trying to eat my peanut butter crack earlier
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BuggyOs
Awww

Desire
Will do once she emerges from hiding lol




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Need critics!November 4, 2017 10:49 PM


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So lately I've been trying to get out of drawing cartoony cats. I've been trying to add more detail (which i need work on ;;) But can someone give my picture some tips?

https://kyothered.deviantart.com/art/Eden-713461234?ga_submit_new=10%3A1509853258

Art is by me, AKA
kyothered on DA ^^
Need critics!November 19, 2017 06:19 PM


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I love the style and colouring! I just think you need to work on the head shape as it looks a tad bit more canine than feline. Otherwise, amazing work!
Need critics!December 18, 2017 08:16 PM


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Needs whiskers and the snout thingy looks too canine-ish
Need critics!December 29, 2017 04:10 PM


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The snout needs to be a little less narrow and much smaller. The ears might have to be a little bit bigger. Other than that it's pretty awesome! ^-^
Need critics!December 29, 2017 05:53 PM


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The way the fur goes on the neck - there's a part where it parts a little unnaturally, like somebody's parted it with a comb. Unless they're a housecat, I suggest that you fix that. I assume that you mean for the eyes to be shaped that way, since it's a cartoon-style drawing, but still, maybe they should be rotated more south-westward. As others have said, the snout is not a feline's; it lacks the whisker points, jowls, and softer/fatter jawline of a feline. Perhaps the ears should be a little more pointy. But all in all, it's pretty good! The coloring and background flatter the shape nicely, and said colors don't contrast overall, so it finishes cleanly. Just work on the anatomy a little more, and it would overall be pretty perfect.

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