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It's a pretty log in page

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Same, brand new!!

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Man, I scrapped that one code and now I'm just essentially frankensteining another one.

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Noo... not the hair xD You'll need it. You don't want to be bald ay?

But like, seriously, i could have sat with that for eternity xD

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... I have been suffering with this code for an entire day and a half essentially.

I'm going to pull my hair out.

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>..>

Never let me try and code anything again.

I am absolute garbage.

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I get that, that's irritating as all get out. At least you aren't putting quarters into a busted machine though ;-;

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Some critique on recent peices

August 6, 2019 08:11 PM

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Title says it all

https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=38129

Some critique on recent peices

August 6, 2019 08:26 PM

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Those are really good, I think you're a talented artist but you could work on better lineart. I really love your work, you're one of the better artists on this site.

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August 6, 2019 08:28 PM

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Sablecrest Guardians said:
Those are really good, I think you're a talented artist but you could work on better lineart. I really love your work, you're one of the better artists on this site.

The lineart for my work is something I'm always trying to improve and bring in new techmiques

But wow never would I ever think that so thank you so so much ❤️

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August 7, 2019 01:15 AM

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Okay, so first thing, your art is absolutely beautiful! I love the first, second, and fourth example the best as they really do have nice shading, coloring, background and the proportions are spot on!

As for the fifth I think maybe the horse could blend with the background a bit more if you know what I mean? It doesn’t exactly fit with the background. For number six I’d say maybe make the muzzle a tad thinner for the muzzle looks slightly off to me.

For 7, I have no words, just spot on!

I really do think you have amazing skills! P,ease keep up your amazing artwork

Edited at August 7, 2019 01:15 AM by Pride Klaw

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August 7, 2019 04:52 AM

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Oh wow thank you so much!

And yep I agree with everything you say fior 7

Pride Klaw said:
Okay, so first thing, your art is absolutely beautiful! I love the first, second, and fourth example the best as they really do have nice shading, coloring, background and the proportions are spot on!

As for the fifth I think maybe the horse could blend with the background a bit more if you know what I mean? It doesnÂ’t exactly fit with the background. For number six IÂ’d say maybe make the muzzle a tad thinner for the muzzle looks slightly off to me.

For 7, I have no words, just spot on!

I really do think you have amazing skills! P,ease keep up your amazing artwork

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August 7, 2019 07:33 PM

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Still looking for some constructive criticism

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August 7, 2019 08:18 PM

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I think on 5 and 9 could be better blended into the background, and the rest I would clean up the line work.

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August 7, 2019 08:19 PM

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Thank you for your tips and yes I'm definatly trying to improve line work and mess with techniques as we speka

And with backgrounds it's something I struggle with doing phoot manip so I'll try and do that

Spring Spark said:
I think on 5 and 9 could be better blended into the background, and the rest I would clean up the line work.

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