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And damn your art is amazing
I need a dragon wolf now

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Thank you XD
I also got a dynamic and legendary pelt in the same litter

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Cae are you still here?
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marsh <333 go sleep beloved!!

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Marsh I will carry on arting <3 I am drawing the cutie pie~

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it is bedtime however unfortunately :( 3 am

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I have two hotwheel bubble gum tattoos...do I put on more or keep it at two XD

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freehanding poses because i cant be bothered when it comes to personal art lmao
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Forgot Moros was bred out xD

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05:22:29 🤓

the WORST feeling

05:21:35 Cae, Blue

nooo i skipped over mountains bird man D:

05:19:38 Cae, Blue

amy, yooo, congrats! :D

05:19:00 Exist / Kuskyn

Amy, Mine are fighting my love at the moment xD

I saw cute character and Needed to attack xD

05:18:35 🤓

Exist
omg I LOVE the sketch so far

05:17:59 Amy/Anpmygdala

Exist
And damn your art is amazing
I need a dragon wolf now

05:17:21 Amy/Anpmygdala

Exist
Thank you XD
I also got a dynamic and legendary pelt in the same litter

05:16:18 Exist / Kuskyn

Amy, Ooh she is gorgeous

05:15:03 Amy/Anpmygdala

Cae are you still here?
Look what i got today ^^
-WP Click-

05:12:04 Exist / Kuskyn

-Click-
Adorable at it's peak

05:06:38 marsh | they/it

thank youu i will <3

05:05:59 Cae, Blue

marsh <333 go sleep beloved!!

05:05:14 🤓

go to bed !!

05:05:06 Exist / Kuskyn

Marsh I will carry on arting <3 I am drawing the cutie pie~

05:05:00 🤓

That's such a CUTE POSE

05:03:16 marsh | they/it

it is bedtime however unfortunately :( 3 am

05:03:11 Is a dinosaur rawr

I have two hotwheel bubble gum tattoos...do I put on more or keep it at two XD

05:02:42 marsh | they/it

freehanding poses because i cant be bothered when it comes to personal art lmao
-Click-

05:01:29 Is a dinosaur rawr

Good game whoever I just pvp ^^

04:58:16 Exist / Kuskyn

Forgot Moros was bred out xD

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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