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if anyone sees my wolves in explore please let me know
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That sounds horrendous. I can't hardly do my own lore--
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Zeraphia

I write lore for people. Its not fun (I'm going insane)
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like awesome we have a paragraph done! oh...oh no.... another paragraph...
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Unless RPs count--
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everytime i finish comms im like wow i can take more and then suddenly im artblocked
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lol.
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I've got 65 on here xD
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 Red River Wolves
09:47:17 Redd Dead
-WP Click-
Very important poll
 Serpents
09:47:03 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
if anyone sees my wolves in explore please let me know
 Zeraphia
09:42:37 Space Pirate Captain
That sounds horrendous. I can't hardly do my own lore--
 SammytheRaccoon
09:41:28 Sam/Samuel/Racc
Zeraphia

I write lore for people. Its not fun (I'm going insane)
 SammytheRaccoon
09:40:41 Sam/Samuel/Racc
like awesome we have a paragraph done! oh...oh no.... another paragraph...
 Zeraphia
09:40:34 Space Pirate Captain
I don't' think I've ever taken a writing comm.

Unless RPs count--
 SammytheRaccoon
09:40:05 Sam/Samuel/Racc
I draw and write. Writing comms make me question my sanity
 starmutt
09:36:49 marsh | they/it
i either take on a comm and finish it within the hour or i forget i took it on for a solid 3 months or so
 The Reaper
09:36:38 Reaper / Grim
I both love and despise comms, design comms that is since that's my thing
 Zeraphia
09:31:51 Space Pirate Captain
Marsh

I always praise people who can and do commissions.
 starmutt
09:29:07 marsh | they/it
so valid for that
 Zeraphia
09:28:54 Space Pirate Captain
The thought of comms makes my brain hurt.
 starmutt
09:28:30 marsh | they/it
everytime i finish comms im like wow i can take more and then suddenly im artblocked
 SammytheRaccoon
09:23:34 Sam/Samuel/Racc
I'm like 6 comms deep, so i'll be ballin ballin rich man after I finish them
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lol.
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I've got 65 on here xD
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-Click- :')
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work, work, work
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I'm comm-maxxing right now
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Goodnight lol think imma find a new person and gift them some mush ^^




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

https://s15.postimg.cc/4jkmy4zrf/draft.png
Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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