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Hero feather child defect go figure ;-;
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Kryuk,

This is fucked. You are not supposed to act like this. Fear me! I will... uh.. throw dumplings at your window!

..I don't know. Please save me.
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Reaper time to try and get a good female boost xD
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Daze
Because I'm the opposite of scared of you. Did you forget you are a bestie?

Exist
XD Nice
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Reaper I am sitting at 27K and I was like "Maybe I can make myself another pretty boy" xD
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Kryuk,

Dammit, how did you turn this situation on me -
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Existence,
o-o Well damn hes nice.
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Exist
Damn, WP kick in?
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Daze
You know where I'm at, bring it on and I'll cook some decent food for y'all
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Kryuk,

Ha, I suppose you're right.
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Reaper, I'm tempted just to do coat designs xD people can give gear and stuff later xD
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Daze
Yeah but if your squad is anything like you, I'm not scared. <3 Just play some Stephen Lynch and cook food and I'll be all good :)
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Kryuk,

It's a pack of marines. The shortest one of us is 6'2". A pack of 6'2"+ marines in full combat gear, with knives and guns.

Do you think we're coming in for some cuddles? Maybe we'll cook you a nice Chinese dinner?
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Daze
Cause it didn't feel very threatening
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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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