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Ah, sorry. Rules said chat speak was discouraged but some was allowed like common things like lol.


I just try to avoid it entirely. Habit, sorry.
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Cybertronion - spell your words out please. Much appreciated.
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 Cybertronion
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tbh just waiting for teh go-ahead from my co-sponsor now

if they like the pattern/glitter effects, we gonna get cosmic Quasar wings >:D
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OMG my alt account is quasar hoarder and I would totally buy those!!!!!!
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you get teh gear back
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Eventually probably :3

TheCuteHuskyPack sponsored me to make the Dark Fallow which is why those got done next.

Right now I'm working on Quasar matchy, I have someone helping me sponsor those

Not sure which one i'll do next, either another sponsor request or I might make some new glowing tattoo stuff so I can put it on my fav wolf Lightshow xP
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thank you!! im thinking about getting more gear for her
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I can't remember, if a wolf dies do you get the gear back or not?
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@Dire This lady is *so* pretty
 Dire Wolf Haven
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are you going to make light fallow wings?
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lol
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hehe I know I'm snooping XD
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thank you! I am currently putting on all of my wolves :)
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nooo rip wolfie D:
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@Dire Wolf

If you put the lineart layer on the wolf first, then add their other decor on top of it, the lineart won't cover the pretty wings and such on your wolfies :3

(Gear layers in the order you put it on the wolf)
 Dire Wolf Haven
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my best breeder died nooooo
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Dire Wolf

Thank you! ;u;
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 Cybertronion
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 Cybertronion
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Ah, sorry. Rules said chat speak was discouraged but some was allowed like common things like lol.


I just try to avoid it entirely. Habit, sorry.
 Vennenum
10:18:21 Venn/Venne
Cybertronion - spell your words out please. Much appreciated.
 ~♥Nux♥~
10:18:16 You're just yellow
-WP Click-

My lady Cookie. Fingers crossed she gives me a chim. Or something.
 Cybertronion
10:16:56 Cyber / Onion
tbh just waiting for teh go-ahead from my co-sponsor now

if they like the pattern/glitter effects, we gonna get cosmic Quasar wings >:D
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:16:24 Dire, DWH
OMG my alt account is quasar hoarder and I would totally buy those!!!!!!
 Cybertronion
10:15:57 Cyber / Onion
you get teh gear back
 Cybertronion
10:15:50 Cyber / Onion
Eventually probably :3

TheCuteHuskyPack sponsored me to make the Dark Fallow which is why those got done next.

Right now I'm working on Quasar matchy, I have someone helping me sponsor those

Not sure which one i'll do next, either another sponsor request or I might make some new glowing tattoo stuff so I can put it on my fav wolf Lightshow xP
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:15:20 Dire, DWH
thank you!! im thinking about getting more gear for her
 Echo Eclipse
10:15:05 Echo | (They/She/He)
I can't remember, if a wolf dies do you get the gear back or not?
 Cybertronion
10:14:41 Cyber / Onion
-WP Click-

@Dire This lady is *so* pretty
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:14:36 Dire, DWH
are you going to make light fallow wings?
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:14:15 Dire, DWH
lol
 Cybertronion
10:14:09 Cyber / Onion
hehe I know I'm snooping XD
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:13:35 Dire, DWH
thank you! I am currently putting on all of my wolves :)
 Cybertronion
10:13:17 Cyber / Onion
nooo rip wolfie D:
 Cybertronion
10:13:07 Cyber / Onion
@Dire Wolf

If you put the lineart layer on the wolf first, then add their other decor on top of it, the lineart won't cover the pretty wings and such on your wolfies :3

(Gear layers in the order you put it on the wolf)
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:11:57 Dire, DWH
my best breeder died nooooo
 Cybertronion
10:11:55 Cyber / Onion
Dire Wolf

Thank you! ;u;
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Thank God none of my wolves died




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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