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 Quasar Hoarder
10:35:28 Quasar, QH
too many pups
 Quasar Hoarder
10:35:19 Quasar, QH
well if you end up with too many or something (not possible) you know where to find me lol
 Cybertronion
10:34:27 Cyber / Onion
I found a dye for sale for a little under 3k and snatched it up muhahaha

friend and I are gonna try for Quasar puppies :3 she also picked a dye up, don't think she's picked a wolf to use it on yet though
 Quasar Hoarder
10:33:31 Quasar, QH
thanks! im not entirely sure when or where I got it, but I was like, its pretty! Lol
 Cybertronion
10:32:59 Cyber / Onion
just saw that XD i have a habit of forgetting to refresh chat after being on a page for a while oops

So pretty!! I love the aurora background with her
 Quasar Hoarder
10:32:14 Quasar, QH
did you try the second one?
 Cybertronion
10:31:48 Cyber / Onion
Awww broken link for me, Quasar QH
 VioletEcho
10:31:05 Is a dinosaur rawr
No problem!! I need to finish the thing im doing now XD
 VioletEcho
10:30:27 Is a dinosaur rawr
It's not showing up on my side so Leeu I'm assuming you won one and I won one now?
 Leo
10:29:59 Leo | Bear say rawr
Aura
5-3, gotta go real quick xD
 Howling stars
10:29:21 
Thank you guys so much, I tried to log into this game a couple times, the other tries failed, this worked!
 Quasar Hoarder
10:28:32 Quasar, QH
-WP Click-
 Quasar Hoarder
10:28:23 Quasar, QH
@cyber
when you do the quasar wings I will be putting them on her immediately -WP Click-
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10:25:56 
Howling
Hello welcome to the game ^^
 Cybertronion
10:25:53 Cyber / Onion
welcome to the game, Howling Stars :D
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:24:12 Dire, DWH
they are sooo pretty! I love how there are the glowing tattoo things :P
 Howling stars
10:24:08 
Hi chat! i'm a new player! nice to meet you all! (I can't rp yet, Just one more day!)
 Cybertronion
10:23:07 Cyber / Onion
Quasar wing concepts on Quasar, White, and Slate coats:

-Click-

-Click-

-Click-

and I did a Topaz concept just for fun, I was thinking of using that pelt on Lightshow but I might try for Tiger's Eye for her
-Click-
 Cybertronion
10:20:40 Cyber / Onion
*I'll just
 Cybertronion
10:20:26 Cyber / Onion
Ah, sorry. Rules said chat speak was discouraged but some was allowed like common things like lol.


I just try to avoid it entirely. Habit, sorry.

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 Quasar Hoarder
10:35:28 Quasar, QH
too many pups
 Quasar Hoarder
10:35:19 Quasar, QH
well if you end up with too many or something (not possible) you know where to find me lol
 Cybertronion
10:34:27 Cyber / Onion
I found a dye for sale for a little under 3k and snatched it up muhahaha

friend and I are gonna try for Quasar puppies :3 she also picked a dye up, don't think she's picked a wolf to use it on yet though
 Quasar Hoarder
10:33:31 Quasar, QH
thanks! im not entirely sure when or where I got it, but I was like, its pretty! Lol
 Cybertronion
10:32:59 Cyber / Onion
just saw that XD i have a habit of forgetting to refresh chat after being on a page for a while oops

So pretty!! I love the aurora background with her
 Quasar Hoarder
10:32:14 Quasar, QH
did you try the second one?
 Cybertronion
10:31:48 Cyber / Onion
Awww broken link for me, Quasar QH
 VioletEcho
10:31:05 Is a dinosaur rawr
No problem!! I need to finish the thing im doing now XD
 VioletEcho
10:30:27 Is a dinosaur rawr
It's not showing up on my side so Leeu I'm assuming you won one and I won one now?
 Leo
10:29:59 Leo | Bear say rawr
Aura
5-3, gotta go real quick xD
 Howling stars
10:29:21 
Thank you guys so much, I tried to log into this game a couple times, the other tries failed, this worked!
 Quasar Hoarder
10:28:32 Quasar, QH
-WP Click-
 Quasar Hoarder
10:28:23 Quasar, QH
@cyber
when you do the quasar wings I will be putting them on her immediately -WP Click-
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10:25:56 
Howling
Hello welcome to the game ^^
 Cybertronion
10:25:53 Cyber / Onion
welcome to the game, Howling Stars :D
 Dire Wolf Haven
10:24:12 Dire, DWH
they are sooo pretty! I love how there are the glowing tattoo things :P
 Howling stars
10:24:08 
Hi chat! i'm a new player! nice to meet you all! (I can't rp yet, Just one more day!)
 Cybertronion
10:23:07 Cyber / Onion
Quasar wing concepts on Quasar, White, and Slate coats:

-Click-

-Click-

-Click-

and I did a Topaz concept just for fun, I was thinking of using that pelt on Lightshow but I might try for Tiger's Eye for her
-Click-
 Cybertronion
10:20:40 Cyber / Onion
*I'll just
 Cybertronion
10:20:26 Cyber / Onion
Ah, sorry. Rules said chat speak was discouraged but some was allowed like common things like lol.


I just try to avoid it entirely. Habit, sorry.




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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