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 Lackadaisy
10:46:30 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Gilly had enormous paws when she was a pup. She's barely grown into them
 Zeraphia
10:44:38 Space Pirate Captain
Stray / Never

I think luckily, he's finished growing. Eddie has these giant paws though lol

He will do anything for attention.
 Caeruleum
10:44:17 Cae, Blue
you can check how many wolves have each one in trading post ^^
 DARK_WOLF
10:43:19 Millie
Whats the rarest defect in the game?
 Nevermore.
10:40:09 Never/Nev
I'm cackling Vah, he sounds like such a sweet idiot

Stashe likes to go between my legs, grab his tail and run in circles. It was cute when he was a puppy, but now that he no longer fits between my legs it's no longer cute :")
 DARK_WOLF
10:39:21 Millie
Hi everyone!
 Lackadaisy
10:39:21 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Pssh
 Zeraphia
10:38:01 Space Pirate Captain
XD

That's hilarious!

He has no clue he's run into anything. He will barrel into you at full speed if you aren't careful.

Has tried walking between my legs while I am actively walking too.
 Nevermore.
10:37:49 Never/Nev
My GSD is a bull in a China shop as well.. my lab however is so careful about where he puts his feet.
 Lackadaisy
10:35:44 Stray, LT | H/H
And* then
 Lackadaisy
10:35:35 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

My Husky does that. Her ass bumps into something at then looks up at you like /you/ did it!
 Zeraphia
10:32:59 Space Pirate Captain
My reckless mutt leans against you.

... he also has no concept of where he is. Bull in a china shop
 Lackadaisy
10:32:03 Stray, LT | H/H
Nev

Oh, lord lmao
 Nevermore.
10:29:47 Never/Nev
Stray

My 115 GSD likes to lean on me. Knocked my poor grandmother over while she was here
 Lackadaisy
10:28:31 Stray, LT | H/H
😆
 Kháos
10:27:33 🌪️
The fact that the forum is right there on the first page too.
 Lackadaisy
10:27:26 Stray, LT | H/H
Am I the only one with a malinois (or dognin general) that leans entirely into your side

I'd beat her up but she'd maul me
 Lackadaisy
10:26:06 Stray, LT | H/H
Khaos,

Lmao >.<
 Zeraphia
10:25:47 Space Pirate Captain
Pffft XD
 Kháos
10:25:31 🌪️
Oh my god I need to start paying attention to chat more. I can't tell when y'all are talking about wed in-game or irl.

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 Lackadaisy
10:46:30 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Gilly had enormous paws when she was a pup. She's barely grown into them
 Zeraphia
10:44:38 Space Pirate Captain
Stray / Never

I think luckily, he's finished growing. Eddie has these giant paws though lol

He will do anything for attention.
 Caeruleum
10:44:17 Cae, Blue
you can check how many wolves have each one in trading post ^^
 DARK_WOLF
10:43:19 Millie
Whats the rarest defect in the game?
 Nevermore.
10:40:09 Never/Nev
I'm cackling Vah, he sounds like such a sweet idiot

Stashe likes to go between my legs, grab his tail and run in circles. It was cute when he was a puppy, but now that he no longer fits between my legs it's no longer cute :")
 DARK_WOLF
10:39:21 Millie
Hi everyone!
 Lackadaisy
10:39:21 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

Pssh
 Zeraphia
10:38:01 Space Pirate Captain
XD

That's hilarious!

He has no clue he's run into anything. He will barrel into you at full speed if you aren't careful.

Has tried walking between my legs while I am actively walking too.
 Nevermore.
10:37:49 Never/Nev
My GSD is a bull in a China shop as well.. my lab however is so careful about where he puts his feet.
 Lackadaisy
10:35:44 Stray, LT | H/H
And* then
 Lackadaisy
10:35:35 Stray, LT | H/H
Vah,

My Husky does that. Her ass bumps into something at then looks up at you like /you/ did it!
 Zeraphia
10:32:59 Space Pirate Captain
My reckless mutt leans against you.

... he also has no concept of where he is. Bull in a china shop
 Lackadaisy
10:32:03 Stray, LT | H/H
Nev

Oh, lord lmao
 Nevermore.
10:29:47 Never/Nev
Stray

My 115 GSD likes to lean on me. Knocked my poor grandmother over while she was here
 Lackadaisy
10:28:31 Stray, LT | H/H
😆
 Kháos
10:27:33 🌪️
The fact that the forum is right there on the first page too.
 Lackadaisy
10:27:26 Stray, LT | H/H
Am I the only one with a malinois (or dognin general) that leans entirely into your side

I'd beat her up but she'd maul me
 Lackadaisy
10:26:06 Stray, LT | H/H
Khaos,

Lmao >.<
 Zeraphia
10:25:47 Space Pirate Captain
Pffft XD
 Kháos
10:25:31 🌪️
Oh my god I need to start paying attention to chat more. I can't tell when y'all are talking about wed in-game or irl.




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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:34 PM


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Getting straight into it. I have this little scholarship essay, a looming due date, and nobody to look over it for me. Help?

Prompt: What are your education and Career Goals? How do you plan on impacting your community in the future?

Essay: Min- 250. Max-500. Current- 261

Revised: 258 words.

My name is []. I'm a senior at [] High School, and my goal, once I graduate, is to pursue an Associate Degree in Baking and Pastry Arts and a Bachelor's in Food and Beverage Management at [] & [] University. This will prepare me for owning my own business in the future. What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment. I then knew that, unlike other hobbies I had tried, this was what I truly enjoyed and wished to spend time furthering my knowledge of. When I first had the thought of owning my own business, I didn't think of doing much with it. Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate. My wish is to create a community filled with acceptance and warmth by using any business I create. What I wish to do is hire certain nonviolent criminals and those who are beginning to age out of the foster care system, therefore giving a second chance to those who need it. This scholarship would allow me to gain the skills necessary to not only survive but thrive in my chosen field, as well as use my experience to help others thrive.


Edited at December 31, 2022 08:21 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:43 PM


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It's good, but I feel like there are still some things you could improve
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:46 PM


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Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:54 PM


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It does help! Also, I wish I could ask a teacher to look it over but the due date is before winter break is over so most of my teachers aren't checking their email.

Wilted said:
Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!


I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:08 PM


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Edited at December 31, 2022 07:53 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:20 PM


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Hmm, have you tried reading this out loud? There's a lot of commas/pauses. I wouldn't exactly try to compress everything into one sentence, as that can be a mouthful (brainful? I'm still tired).
Try splitting them up a bit?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:30 PM


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Try to change "What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made" to:
My passion for baking made me desire a career in this field, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:33 PM


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Be sure to add a period between 'made' and 'the'
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
Should be
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made. The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:34 PM


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I'm just pointing out minor things that need to be fixed for now
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:35 PM


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Wow, kinda embarrassed I didn't notice I forgot a period lol
Also, I appreciate any and all help!

Edited at December 31, 2022 08:36 PM by Flower Field

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