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 Eternity
11:58:25 ET
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I'm always here for chat essays B)

That's very cool! :D and is a welcome change. I do find it kinda crazy that people could ever look up to me though!

Hands is low-key not a bad place to start LMAO. Humans are super fun to draw! :D I'm still learning how to do it myself. I find dogs so much easier </3

Oh genuinely, I feel like watching the WP chat could be a sport LMAO. So much crazy shit happens.

And ouch! Those god damn exacto blades are out to get us </3

I try to be! :D sometimes I forget or dip mid way through trying to help but I do my best LOL
 Dont Fear The Reaper
11:58:07 Reaper / Grim
Aztecs
Anytime!
 Aztecs
11:57:21 
reaper

ohhhhgdhheh okay thank you!
 Dont Fear The Reaper
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Aztecs
You just have to grind. If you have wolves that'll pop soon, you might have to find someone to board them
 Aztecs
11:53:22 
hey chat
does anyone have any tips on how to get apples / den spots asap >_<, i swear i’ve tried everything but it’s all so expensive
 Eternity
11:44:05 ET
Thunderpaws
I just don't know how to shut up </3 got so much to say.

Nux
</3 you know it LMAO
 ♡Junipero♡
11:43:31 Juni/Jun (he/they)
Chat is quite loquacious today.
(I love using that word).
 Dont Fear The Reaper
11:36:51 Reaper / Grim
ET
Haha! I rarely have anyone I get to write chat essays for! XD

I don't think I was ever scared of you, like a healthy amount of respect plus I've always looked up to you.
Awww thank you!!! I hope so, I want to slowly be able to make an entire person. I doubt many people start on the hands XD

It is a lot of fun to talk about the chaos on here XD I'll talk to my friends about the little out of pocket comments people make and it's so funny XD

It probably was, what's really funny is that early 2023 I ended up cutting my own hand upen with an exacto knife and I still have a scar XD

Omg it did! I had said, If I ever need help (especially with art) you're always there <3
 SunGaze
11:35:59 Sunny, not SunGlaze
Thunderpaws,
Yeah, it's so confusing sometimes.
And yeah I usually wear a tail or some sort of gear.
Good night! Sleep well.
 ~♥Nux♥~
11:34:57 You're just yellow
Spoops

Ahh, yes. The Great Floods.
 Thunderpaws
11:32:35 
Gn
 Thunderpaws
11:32:08 
SunGaze,
That's so real ngl Most other therians in public know I'm a therian bc I always have the Thera-delta on my hand lol
 Zeraphia
11:31:09 Festive Vah
I can bring sketches

-Click-

They were from last night but eh
 SunGaze
11:30:51 Sunny, not SunGlaze
Alright I'm going to go to bed. Good night all, and if I slip away for the holidays happy holidays!
 Continental Wolves
11:29:29 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf
The great floods of chat (ETs presence in chat)
 SunGaze
11:29:08 Sunny, not SunGlaze
Thunderpaws,
Ah, okay. I know about, like, 6 or 7 Theriotypes but only 4 of them I remember somewhat of a past life.
 Thunderpaws
11:28:00 
SunGaze,
Same Though I've only completely found out the species 3 of my theriotypes though I know I have a lot
 SunGaze
11:26:15 Sunny, not SunGlaze
Thunderpaws,
Nice! I'm a Poly-Therian so I have many different Theriotypes lol
 Thunderpaws
11:25:23 
SunGaze,
Yes!
 ~♥Nux♥~
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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

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Colored final product

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Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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