Wolf Play : I tried to draw and need some feedback

02:57:55 Is a dinosaur rawr

Grim oof :/

The Reaper

02:40:50 Reaper / Grim

Gotta love the inability to sleep

Vennenum

02:26:08 Venn/Venne

Of course I get the middle seat on the international flight. :\

02:18:46

Anyone want to RP? PM me!

01:49:26 Pera

@Tonneoshet
Take it outside and put swimmers on, then open it

01:37:40 Is a dinosaur rawr

Neo hopefully it's just really badly dented ...have you tried like lightly tapping the top of the can we always do that to prevent it exploding but maybe wait a little bit before opening it XD

01:32:37 Tony - Neo - Bug

Like what do I do!??
-Click-

I swear if I try to open it it's gonna explode on me xD

01:29:54 Tony - Neo - Bug

I am TERRIFIED, to open my can of coke. I feel like the delivery guy dropped it because there's the biggest blown out bit at the bottom of the can so it can't even sit upright-

01:21:59 Pera

-WP Click- Just looking for some help <3

01:15:09

anyone want to RP?

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12:56:30 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 441 days in a row.

12:53:00 Space Pirate Captain

Hehe

Finished this little backstory thing and now I can sleep.
-Click-

12:51:01 Space Pirate Captain

ET

Oh man, yeah. I can't blame you one bit.

12:48:51 ET

Vah
Going through graphics tablet withdrawal, it's been two week, I can't live like this </3
LOL

12:42:42 Stray, LT | H/H

poof

12:41:48 Space Pirate Captain

ET

Oh my stars that's the worst.

Stray

Ooh new pfp :3

12:40:42 ET

Vah
They were supposed to be delivered yesterday! :0
But they've not arrived and I have no tracking info as they've been sent second class, so honestly I have no clue when they'll turn up.

Getting things delivered to my flat is a nightmare so I *have* to be in whenever it arrives

12:39:12 Space Pirate Captain

ET

Hehe.

Don't they come tomorrow though?

12:39:09 Stray, LT | H/H

My neck is almost broken and my spine is twisted into a horrible position but am I going to stop concepting? No

Geminae

12:39:08

*evil laugh*
more den space >:3

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02:57:55 Is a dinosaur rawr

Grim oof :/

The Reaper

02:40:50 Reaper / Grim

Gotta love the inability to sleep

Vennenum

02:26:08 Venn/Venne

Of course I get the middle seat on the international flight. :\

02:18:46

Anyone want to RP? PM me!

01:49:26 Pera

@Tonneoshet
Take it outside and put swimmers on, then open it

01:37:40 Is a dinosaur rawr

Neo hopefully it's just really badly dented ...have you tried like lightly tapping the top of the can we always do that to prevent it exploding but maybe wait a little bit before opening it XD

01:32:37 Tony - Neo - Bug

Like what do I do!??
-Click-

I swear if I try to open it it's gonna explode on me xD

01:29:54 Tony - Neo - Bug

I am TERRIFIED, to open my can of coke. I feel like the delivery guy dropped it because there's the biggest blown out bit at the bottom of the can so it can't even sit upright-

01:21:59 Pera

-WP Click- Just looking for some help <3

01:15:09

anyone want to RP?

Continental Wolves

12:56:30 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

You have logged in 441 days in a row.

12:53:00 Space Pirate Captain

Hehe

Finished this little backstory thing and now I can sleep.
-Click-

12:51:01 Space Pirate Captain

ET

Oh man, yeah. I can't blame you one bit.

12:48:51 ET

Vah
Going through graphics tablet withdrawal, it's been two week, I can't live like this </3
LOL

12:42:42 Stray, LT | H/H

poof

12:41:48 Space Pirate Captain

ET

Oh my stars that's the worst.

Stray

Ooh new pfp :3

12:40:42 ET

12:39:12 Space Pirate Captain

ET

Hehe.

Don't they come tomorrow though?

12:39:09 Stray, LT | H/H

My neck is almost broken and my spine is twisted into a horrible position but am I going to stop concepting? No

Geminae

12:39:08

*evil laugh*
more den space >:3

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August 4, 2020 05:50 PM

Darksky

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Hello, i was bored and decided to try my best at art. I believe i was trying to draw a bear XD. Please comment any tips or advice anyone has so i can try to improve.

Heres the wanna be bear XD:

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Any advice would be greatly appreciated

Edit: heres some new stuff that i just made that i really enjoyed making. Same rules apply give me some feedback please :)

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second attempt at an animal this is a puppy :)

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at least it should be XD

Edited at August 8, 2020 09:51 PM by Akugitsune328

August 4, 2020 05:53 PM

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I really like what you have here, maybe try looking at references of bears to assist in a more realistic approach. If you're going for a more cartoonish one, then more aesthetic style perhaps? Very good though.

August 4, 2020 06:11 PM

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Aww its adorable <3

I would do as Frigid suggested and use a reference photo. It will give you an idea of which direction the fur lays, there the eyes are in proportion to the nose, mouth, etc. I would also reccomend learning how to shade and highlight based on reference photos. You can make a white blob look 3d and realistic if you shade it right ^^

Another tip is to upload your reference photo into whatever art program you are using, preferably in a different tab so that you can use the color picker tool (The eyedropper thing) to use the exact colors from the image. It will save you time trying to get the colors to match and will also be most accurate.

You can also use this reference photo to sketch out your image by creating layers and lowering the opacity of the photo, then drawing on the layer above it, But obviously make sure to either credit the reference photo or change your sketch enough to prevent any accidental theft.

Hope this helps! I would post links to a few helpful videos but I don't know if that goes against the hotlinking rules, so if you want them I can PM them to you!

Edit: One other thing, Wolf Play requires you to put your pack # on your artwork so that you are easily identifiable, for theft protection. They do not accept artist signitures because they can't possibly memorize them all. Don't be suprized if your photo gets mod-edit removed for lack of proper crediting. You can fix this by simply adding on your pack # under your signiture or somewhere it is visable ^^

Art Crediting Guide ~

Edited at August 4, 2020 06:17 PM by Viviren

August 5, 2020 12:18 AM

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I think you should blend your colors more. Im talking about the oragne and white lines on the nose and fur. Blend those together, otherwise im not rlly an artist so everything else is up to you.

August 5, 2020 10:27 AM