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 ZefhyrMaracaibo
02:44:18 
mail me if you know why? i dont want to miss the answer
 ZefhyrMaracaibo
02:36:40 
so WHY doesnt feeding the hunt pack snacks in battle mode make the hunger meter go up?? it actually gets worse... ??
 Boeing
02:36:23 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Dove
>.>
I take it back. You really do like expensive things, like the good pups that definitely came from your puppy boom lmao
 Frozen Mist
02:35:05 Frozen - Mist
Boing,
Probably not.

Uhm.... I have to go buy the good ones. XD
 Boeing
02:28:30 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Dove
Is that a good thing? XD

And for every dud at least you got some good ones I guess :D
 Frozen Mist
02:27:22 Frozen - Mist
Boing,
I like expensive things. :'D


Duds upon duds upon duds. >.>
 Boeing
02:26:53 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Dove
... and that too >.>
damn lmao
That's a lot of monies xD

What's wrong with your puppy boom though? So far what have you got
 Frozen Mist
02:25:43 Frozen - Mist
Boing,
Aaaand my infatuation female. :D
 Boeing
02:25:07 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Dove
I see you spent even more apples on the second HH stud >.<
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Hey Boing.
 Boeing
02:23:56 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Dove! :D
 Frozen Mist
02:23:15 Frozen - Mist
My pup boom has not been good. >.>
 Tooth&Claw
02:18:20 
I agree mistclaw, it should have been changed backend and tested first then offered as an alternative mode. I'm really struggling with it now.
 Tooth&Claw
02:15:56 
Thank you, found it with a bit of trial and error. Probably need a bit more fiddling to get that to work. Neither mode seems very promising just at the moment though.
 Spirit Wolves
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G2 Dynamic sniffs under a bush and finds Painted Pottery!

Erm. Since when?
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02:12:26 Mistclaw
Ugh, this new mobile layout is terrible on my tablet even when I put it into desktop mode. Wish it could just go back to normal :(
 Boeing
02:08:30 Boe is a bear, Rawr!
Tooth
It's in your browser settings somwhere, not on the site but in the drop down menu in your browser if what I heard is right
 Tooth&Claw
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Where do we go to set a phone to desktop mode? I've looked round all the menus and I can't find it.
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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

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Colored final product

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Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


Former Pack

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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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