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I keep saying merry christmas! It's christmas today in Denmark and i keep forgettingn it's not like that other places! XD

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Got to go now! See ya tomorrow! Merry christmas!

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Good game Barlow

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Darky XD
oooo snow, it's hot here

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Anyhow I have to clear some snow. I will be on later on course

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Leo knows I can be easy to defeat. Sent my whole pack fleeing this week xD

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You too! Yayy :D thank you<3

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Good game Echo! I was also your 111th paw up just now <3

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Darky I love your wolves
:0 one day I will beat you ^^

06:05:03 Darky, DG

This year I have won about 350 since my bio says I won my 1000th back in Feb

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And that is also without calculating the time i learned the game and not knew what PvP was xD

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Forgot to say

DG
Thanks!! XD

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DG
And in that year i've had a 3 month break xD That's 1/4th of a year :D

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Normally I'd mines sad compared to yours but I am actually proud of my pvp improvement ^^

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Congrats Leo! 500 wins in less then a year is pretty great :D

05:59:47 Vi, Echo, Aria

Well I'm almost at 30 so yeah take that haha :D

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Seems like i will reach my goal of 500 before 2025 :D

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14 wins to 500 :DDDD

05:58:41 Vi, Echo, Aria

Pvp anyone?
Like I should be doing that now but yeah XD

05:56:53 Darky, DG

My pack went from loving each other at 90 happiness to hating each other at 30 pack happiness xD I need to stop playing pack life

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September 21, 2019 09:12 PM

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<div align="center">hi -

<div align="center">i am looking for critiques on my art so i can develop as an artist.

<div align="center">i want to improve my art, so please give honest feedback.<div align="center">
<div align="center">i would appreciate it.<div align="center">thank you! <3<div align="center">
<div align="center">gallery - https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=5&t=40219<div align="center">
<div align="center">i use my phone for art because it doesn't hate me like my computer.<div align="center">
<div align="center">i might start doing things on my computer but that is unlikely anytime soon.<div align="center">
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<div align="center">tips -<div align="center">-make foreheads less sharp.<div align="center">-neck length and anatomy.<div align="center">-eyes.<div align="center">
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Edited at September 21, 2019 09:31 PM by After Death

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September 21, 2019 09:24 PM

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A bit spaghetti like legs but its adorable, honestly I like how it looks but the first picture has a long neck,

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September 21, 2019 09:26 PM

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Your style is adorable and has a lot of potential to get even better :o

My main thoughts are to work on eyes. Unfortunately i'm horrid at art and need to work on them myself so i cannot give tips on how to do so. Also maybe make the foreheads less sharp?

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September 21, 2019 09:27 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">crows -

<div style="text-align: center;">the spaghetti legs were on purpose ;)

<div style="text-align: center;">my regular legs don't look like that, but i should've said that in my post. i will try to make sure the neck isn't as long in future art with that pose.<div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">thanks for the criticism! c:<div style="text-align: center;">

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September 21, 2019 09:30 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">king-

<div style="text-align: center;">thank you, that means a lot!

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<div style="text-align: center;">next time i will make the foreheads less shard and a but more sloped. c:<div style="text-align: center;">i will look at wolf images to improve on my eyes.<div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">thanks for the criticism!

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September 22, 2019 09:13 PM

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<div style="text-align: center;">Perhaps you could work on your proportion and anatomy more? On your full body ref sheet I noticed that the head is a little bit bigger than it should be, typically 2 heads should fit on where the body would be, if you know what I mean ^^.

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<div style="text-align: center;">I've seen some of your older works where you didn't draw spaghetti legs, and the anatomy of the back legs could be improved :). <div style="text-align: center;">
<div style="text-align: center;">Something I think you should also do is go into more complex shading, instead of just plain old cell shading. Or you could do complex cell shading :000

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September 22, 2019 09:13 PM

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<div align="center">Double post

Edited at September 22, 2019 09:17 PM by Eclipse~

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September 22, 2019 09:14 PM

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<div align="center">Triple post

Edited at September 22, 2019 09:16 PM by Eclipse~

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September 22, 2019 11:43 PM

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I have no words friend, I love your art <3

Though like a previous post, the necks look a little long to me unless they’re out looking for cats to steal for u. Which, actually might be a good thing for u

Edited at September 22, 2019 11:43 PM by Pride Klaw

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