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Devine

Share 50k mush with me/J
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that's just devine's thing, wouldn't be the first time lol
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apothecary
helps with the going into debt thing
 Amygdala
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the perfect wolf
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i wonder if i should dye her because i can't afford to customise her
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02:16:26 Medicinally Autistic
Why would you bid 50k in sanctuary?
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Jack

My sister is always like an hour late when she comes to get me. Yes i could drive myself but i hate driving
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You Speak To Me. sees a human's house and backs away carefully.
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Ry

*^* Yessir we SO do!! I'm so hyped <3

Go grab it!! >:3 It should be in my profile tab haha
 devine
02:13:54 vi, devi
So i'm thinking(if possible)
bid 50k on a player auction, 50k in sanctuary, then spend my 50k mush on explore moves, and be at negative 100k with 50k moves
why?
don't worry about it
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I've been trying to do the event quests this time because half of them give Jasmines/Toucan Feathers/Blue Jay feathers/Bald eagle feathers/winged dolls.
 Jack-A-Boo
02:13:20 Boo, Vapor (he/Him)
lowkey I'm freakinf out cause the person who was supposed to pick me up from my clinicals and take me back to campus is late
 ~♥Nux♥~
02:13:04 You're just yellow
Now she's gonna be BE trained
 ~♥Nux♥~
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I wasted my CP on her... because I like doing dumb shit, obviously.
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Has anybody put in suggestions that you can put multiple buried items up in marketplace at once? I forgot how to search for that. Do you search topics? or?
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Apoth

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 dedboidevil
02:11:32 ded / Ryan
Vapor
Hehe we need to draw up designs for each other to get done. Once I move out of Cali, we gotta try to do this teehee

And I do need your badge. Gimme gimme
I need to make a new one good lord
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You were my victim today @Jack-A-Boo
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FINALLY got a blog going, whew
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Saying I wanna be a victim sounds horrible out of context

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Critique me!May 15, 2022 07:29 PM


Ciao

Darkseeker
 
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I have no clue what I'm doing. Gallery Link

A few hours ago I was bored and decided to become an artist with no previous experience. With that being said this is my attempt to draw an OC of mine and I would like feedback. The anatomy seems a bit funky, he is supposed to be a wolf. I also colored him. For those of you that want to, you can go over and red line stuff so I can see what to fix! If you have tips on blending and colors that would be appreciated as well. I draw using Adobe Fresco, but if there are other good apps to use, let me know.

I'll link minor stuff and put the images for more important stuff so this isn't too long. Thanks :)

OC for reference(yes the oc is mine)

All image credit from here down belongs to me.

First red line

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First red line and outline

Altered final outline (I have no idea how I changed it this much)

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Colored final product

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Colored final product with OG lines behind it (for comparison, also I forgot to screenshot the red line that's under it. That one is in fact the original, the first red line linked at the top is the second red line I did in order to fix this. If that makes sense.)


Edited at May 17, 2022 07:49 PM by Ciao
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:21 PM


jaune

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hello! very cute character youve got there!!

ive been drawing canines/wolves in particular for going on 6(ish) years now id say, and ive learned a lot about drawing them over the years, so im here to offer a few tips (as well as some blue lines for future reference)!

so canine anatomy is very hard to explain, but the way i improved is by studying the canine body by tracing over actual photos of wolves i found online. ive found simplifying their bodies and more specifically their limbs into simple shapes and refinining from there helps a ton for anatomy improvement!

ive bluelined over your image and focused on a few different things, and ill list the links to view them below!

these are just a few quick base sketches i whipped up within like 5 minutes so theyre not perfect, but i hope theyre able to help a bit!

you have a lot of potential and im so excited to see your improvement!! if you need anything at all dont be scared to reach out to me and ill try my best to help! :)


Edited at May 15, 2022 08:26 PM by jaune
Critique me!May 15, 2022 08:53 PM


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Darkseeker
 
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Thank you for the help! I can definitely see how I can improve the design more, and the blue line especially helped. For the anatomy I think tracing a real wolf would really help as well. I appreciate your critique and i'll definitely reach out if I have more questions :)
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:07 PM


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Ah- I might be of assistance here. Anatomy is quite off, /lighthearted
If I forget to add the redlines pm me I get busy lol
Critique me!May 15, 2022 09:48 PM


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Thanks, i'll pm you^^

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