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Lightbringer
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Any advice would help as well Credit: 233415 Poll Question: Is this art good or bad?Total Votes: 25
Very good : | 4 | 16% | | Good : | 6 | 24% | | Unsure : | 10 | 40% | | Bad : | 3 | 12% | | Very bad : | 2 | 8% | | You have cast your vote.
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Darkseeker
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Mabey add claws to the paw print like this
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Neutral
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I can't necessarily say if it's good or bad. Everyone has their own unique style, some more detailed than others and some more cartoony. Some people also have more refined tastes than others, and answers can be based on those tastes. I personally think this is cute, the front paw is higher up that the back paw, which could be fixed with a simple secondary layer of nothing more than a straight line representing a floor/ground. Hope this helps. ^^
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Lightbringer
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I think it's very good! Quite adorable!
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Darkseeker
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lol above we have a prime example of the differences of evil, neutral, and good.
But yeah the addition of claws would pretty good
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Neutral
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while i'm not qualified by any means to give advice, i will still try to give some tips that help me with my own art.
1. train yourself to identify shapes within anatomy! while cute, it's not instantly obvious what animal this is. i like to find clean picture of an animal i want to draw and then sketch simple shapes ontop of it, to almost 'simplify' their existing skeleton and muscles. if i haven't explained this very well, i can add some image examples if you'd like. there are plenty of youtube tutorials (or more experienced artists) available online to also help you learn the fundamentals. after you've done this a few times, you'll have a better understanding of the basic construction of an animal, which will allow you to better study their anatomy.
2. use image references I like to use a collage of real photos of an animal I want to draw, which helps me see where things connect on a surface level. This makes my poses and overall proportions more realistic. While they won't be as accurate as they would if you studied the skeletal and muscular structures of an animal with more detail, it will help you with your proportions to begin with.
I'm awful with explaining, so feel free to ask me (or someone else, there are plenty of more experienced artists on here that would be more than willing to help) to clarify or provide visual examples. i hope it helps!
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Lightbringer
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Better than before. Significantly. And I think on this one we were given features that can help us identify what animal it is. I might've gotten it wrong, but it might be a cheetah? Edited at June 2, 2024 07:25 AM by Upstep Pack
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Lightbringer
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Upstep Pack said: Better than before. Significantly. And I think on this one we were given features that can help us identify what animal it is. I might've gotten it wrong, but it might be a cheetah?
Yeah, it's a cheetah cub
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Lightbringer
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Thanks for the confirmation! The mantle is great! However the hair on the top of the head is too long. And I noticed that the mouth in the face image at the top right is only on one side, I remember an artist making some info. thing about that, instead of in the middle.
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