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 Whispering Grove
08:02:35 fawnii (she/her)
is it worth having wolves with different affinity from your pack? I was looking at some wolves for sale but all the ones I was interested in had a bad/very bad affinity with my pack. All of my wolves are at excellent at the moment and I'm just wondering if there's a way to keep wolves with a different affinity in the pack, maybe with just more work?
 Yukon's Castle
08:00:30 
I know who you're talking about! I watch her TikTok and stuff like that all the time! She's the one that inspired me to look into it for him!

I do have supplements and meds for him already. It just makes me feel bad that I can't do much else for him.
 The Reaper
07:57:29 Reaper / Grim
Yukon
You're not failing as a dog mom! You don't have to go full raw, even supplements mixed into his food or kibble toppers would help. There's a youtuber I love to watch who inspired me to minor in animal nutrition I'd tell you the yt channel but it has her name in it and idk if that would be against the rules :') But she's awesome. She has a German Shepard and husky mix as well as a Shitsu. And she does alot of raw fed/cooked/kibble toppers
 MossyPines
07:57:13 
Yukon - If he's a large breed mix and doesn't come from a responsible breeder it's likely genetic. I know people really love Cosequin for joint support! You're doing your best for him and that's all you can do!
 Yukon's Castle
07:53:44 
Reaper - I've been doing a lot of research because my Rotty mix is have bad joint issues and he's only 4. I've wanted to switch him from what I have him on and possibly feed him raw+ give him other supplements. But, I have 6 other dogs plus tons of other animals. I have him on meds, but nothing seems to be working much anymore and it makes me feel like I'm failing as a dog mom :(
 Silver Shadows
07:53:34 Silver/Shadow/Night
Rain Of War,
broken link
 MLadySkylar
07:52:22 P'Sky
Yukon
I feel the same to my cats
 The Reaper
07:51:27 Reaper / Grim
Yukon
I feel that, I'm minoring in animal nutrition and it feels wrong that I can't give my cat the best XD
 Rain Of War
07:50:57 Novak
-WP Click- He's at 1k CP!! Yay!! Hmmm... I wonder if i can get him to 3k.
 Yukon's Castle
07:50:55 
Me watching other people meal prep their dogs raw diet.

Me to my dogs: I'm sorry we're poor
 The Reaper
07:48:43 Reaper / Grim
Sorry, my cat got out, did I miss anything?
 MLadySkylar
07:38:34 P'Sky
When you forget you have litters coming in >>
Glad I'm still online
 Destinations End
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Hey Sky
 MLadySkylar
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Hi Desti
 Destinations End
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Hey
 MLadySkylar
07:22:57 P'Sky
Stray
<3
It's Oki,
Lesson learned the next guy.

Graywing
Yea since I have a daughter they have to be cool with kids.
I won't ask them to be a father figure
 Stray Secrets
07:20:50 Stray.
@MLadySkylar
i'm sorry, that sucks
 Graywing
07:20:20 Slate, Gray
P'Sky

If they arent willing to have kids and you are a mother... i doubt it would work
 MLadySkylar
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Autumn
Thank you for your opinion.
I'm also weary of that.
I'm extremely stubborn/set in my ways. I doubt someone can change my opinion on that
 Amygdala
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P'sky
Awwwwww

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I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:34 PM


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Getting straight into it. I have this little scholarship essay, a looming due date, and nobody to look over it for me. Help?

Prompt: What are your education and Career Goals? How do you plan on impacting your community in the future?

Essay: Min- 250. Max-500. Current- 261

Revised: 258 words.

My name is []. I'm a senior at [] High School, and my goal, once I graduate, is to pursue an Associate Degree in Baking and Pastry Arts and a Bachelor's in Food and Beverage Management at [] & [] University. This will prepare me for owning my own business in the future. What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment. I then knew that, unlike other hobbies I had tried, this was what I truly enjoyed and wished to spend time furthering my knowledge of. When I first had the thought of owning my own business, I didn't think of doing much with it. Before long, I began to think of all the good I could do for those in situations that I could have been in, had I not been so fortunate. My wish is to create a community filled with acceptance and warmth by using any business I create. What I wish to do is hire certain nonviolent criminals and those who are beginning to age out of the foster care system, therefore giving a second chance to those who need it. This scholarship would allow me to gain the skills necessary to not only survive but thrive in my chosen field, as well as use my experience to help others thrive.


Edited at December 31, 2022 08:21 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:43 PM


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It's good, but I feel like there are still some things you could improve
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:46 PM


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Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 06:54 PM


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It does help! Also, I wish I could ask a teacher to look it over but the due date is before winter break is over so most of my teachers aren't checking their email.

Wilted said:
Heyo, I would replace a bit of your wording;
"while also" -> "in addition to",
"Before too long, however," -> "Not too long after".
Apologies if this was vague or didn't make sense, I'm a little tired hehe. There's a whole list somewhere, but I forgot what it's called.
However if your school has a career center or similar, I do recommend going there or asking a trusted teacher!


I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:08 PM


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Edited at December 31, 2022 07:53 PM by Flower Field
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 07:20 PM


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Hmm, have you tried reading this out loud? There's a lot of commas/pauses. I wouldn't exactly try to compress everything into one sentence, as that can be a mouthful (brainful? I'm still tired).
Try splitting them up a bit?
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:30 PM


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Try to change "What made me desire a career in this field? My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made" to:
My passion for baking made me desire a career in this field, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:33 PM


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Be sure to add a period between 'made' and 'the'
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
Should be
My passion for baking, as well as the sheer joy I felt when seeing others enjoy the dishes I made. The happiness that I was able to create using nothing but my hands and mediocre skills gave me a sense of fulfillment.
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:34 PM


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I'm just pointing out minor things that need to be fixed for now
I dont wanna be a broke college student :)December 31, 2022 08:35 PM


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Wow, kinda embarrassed I didn't notice I forgot a period lol
Also, I appreciate any and all help!

Edited at December 31, 2022 08:36 PM by Flower Field

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