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Your art is always amazing. I have no artistic talent whatsoever. If yoy want a stick figure though, I got you XD
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Wait, I fixed the eyes
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Thank you! Its been a while since I've drawn or posted anything, but Ive been practicing ^^
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Shade you are a pup with?
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how do you get things appraised
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malcuth

gila monster is the perfect name for them
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My cat Gila Monster
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 Kháos
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Joined a new team two weeks ago, am their third best player... and they just kicked the first best from their team. I left them. Why would you kick your best teammate???
 Winter Rose
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i'm back
 Wolf Pride
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Ollie
Your art is always amazing. I have no artistic talent whatsoever. If yoy want a stick figure though, I got you XD
 Faulty Demons
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Wait, I fixed the eyes
-Click-

Wander, Vah
Thank you! Its been a while since I've drawn or posted anything, but Ive been practicing ^^
 Luna❄
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*wth
 Luna❄
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Shade argues with the alphas.
Shade you are a pup with?
 starmutt
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nah its just locked to guests
 Zeraphia
08:22:22 Space Pirate Captain
Ollie

Holy catfish that's gorgeous--the hair?? The shading??
 Malcuth
08:22:13 Wander
It's broken star
 starmutt
08:22:03 marsh | they/it
i love him
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 Malcuth
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Wow! Is lovely
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Thoughts?
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forever
montak in the marketplace
 Foreverdragons23
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how do you get things appraised
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08:11:37 Wander
Haha thank you! She is psycho so calling her "monster" is very fitting
 BuggyOs
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Wander
I love them
 Honey
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malcuth

gila monster is the perfect name for them
 Malcuth
08:10:56 Wander
My cat Gila Monster
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hellooo Bjake!
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Hey BJake!




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animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 10:41 AM


Krampus

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Working on a mini amv, i'm trying to get it done by (this) friday
Somethings off with the timing, can't tell what it is :/
i don't really like the first frame, so i might get rid of it/change it. It doesn't really hold the feeling of weight/locomotion

Edited at June 8, 2023 10:42 AM by Krampus
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 05:29 PM


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Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!


Edited at June 8, 2023 05:29 PM by Beetle Tea
animation/timing help/ criticism neededJune 8, 2023 06:35 PM


Krampus

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Beetle Tea said:

Hmm it looks like you might need more in-betweens, unless that's what you were planning to do.

There's also not a lot of anticipation in the first few frames of the action, which may be why it feels so stiff.

I'd reccomend looking at smear/smush frames and trying those out to get a bit more movement going!

Overall it's really good and good luck with the rest of the project!



i just realised in the last action, i meant to put a flicking of the head/eyes, (as a secondary action) and completely forgot about it.
Not a lot of smear/smush frames here, i'll look into adding those.
thank you for your advice! ^^

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