Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

06:50:16 Reaper / Grim

Lets see if this works
-Click-

Desire of The Hills

06:50:14 Hills / Desire

@King

Yeah, it's doing it for me too.

King

06:49:54 laffy or king

is explore glitching for anyone else? it keeps doing this weird shake refresh thing thats making me nauseous :(

I tried desktop site version, mobile portrait, and mobile landscape but all 3 do it still

Night Shade

06:49:45 Graves | Chaos

Poll :4
-WP Click-

06:49:40 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei

I have everything ready, food isn't needed as the staff will deliver breakfast lunch and dinner to sick people on campus who are quarantined , I'm surprised they are quarantining people, normally they make you go to class regardless of if your sick on not

06:46:34 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
Hmm true but you will need to have everything ready if you end up quarantined

Catori

06:45:17 Cat

Just topped up hidden falls

06:45:10 Pack of Sharp Snap

Enclave
you will see the name of the pack you encountered and a image of a wolf from the pack

06:43:34 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei
I'm avoiding people as much as I can but hey if I get quarantined the at least I can sleep as much as I want XD

Enclave Clan

06:43:09

Ser,
How do we know if we see your wolves in explore? Sorry, I'm new(ish)

Serpents

06:41:06 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

if anyone sees my wolves in explore pm me

Malpha

06:39:14 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Wait there are wolves with double defects??

06:39:05 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
at the rate of the bug going, I doubt you will be going to any classes

06:38:51 Reaper / Grim

Do I scrap the design that turned out looking like a chocolate cake doughnut with white icing-?

LeafClan

06:38:47 Leaf She/Her

-WP Click-
I just pulled this out of WolfParty!

06:37:43 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei

probably his roomate

managers in our class are students but yea his roommate probably gave it to him or one the people he smokes with

06:36:54 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
The medical class manager, has it? Oh no. Who gave it to him? XD

06:35:38 Asmodeus (he/they)

dang hidden falls is empty

06:33:11 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei

I know staff here is glad I ain't sick cause when I get sick I get whiny and have an major attitude problem XD

my medical class manager was quarantined today cause he has it

06:31:40 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
Lucky you indeed. Tell the bug to leave you alone

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Quests

Alliance Battles

Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances

	Bobcat : 0
	Cougar : -4
	Cheetah : -4

Chatbox

06:50:16 Reaper / Grim

Lets see if this works
-Click-

Desire of The Hills

06:50:14 Hills / Desire

@King

Yeah, it's doing it for me too.

King

06:49:54 laffy or king

Night Shade

06:49:45 Graves | Chaos

Poll :4
-WP Click-

06:49:40 Asmodeus (he/they)

06:46:34 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
Hmm true but you will need to have everything ready if you end up quarantined

Catori

06:45:17 Cat

Just topped up hidden falls

06:45:10 Pack of Sharp Snap

Enclave
you will see the name of the pack you encountered and a image of a wolf from the pack

06:43:34 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei
I'm avoiding people as much as I can but hey if I get quarantined the at least I can sleep as much as I want XD

Enclave Clan

06:43:09

Ser,
How do we know if we see your wolves in explore? Sorry, I'm new(ish)

Serpents

06:41:06 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

if anyone sees my wolves in explore pm me

Malpha

06:39:14 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

Wait there are wolves with double defects??

06:39:05 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
at the rate of the bug going, I doubt you will be going to any classes

06:38:51 Reaper / Grim

Do I scrap the design that turned out looking like a chocolate cake doughnut with white icing-?

LeafClan

06:38:47 Leaf She/Her

-WP Click-
I just pulled this out of WolfParty!

06:37:43 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei

probably his roomate

managers in our class are students but yea his roommate probably gave it to him or one the people he smokes with

06:36:54 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
The medical class manager, has it? Oh no. Who gave it to him? XD

06:35:38 Asmodeus (he/they)

dang hidden falls is empty

06:33:11 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei

I know staff here is glad I ain't sick cause when I get sick I get whiny and have an major attitude problem XD

my medical class manager was quarantined today cause he has it

06:31:40 Pack of Sharp Snap

Asmodeus
Lucky you indeed. Tell the bug to leave you alone

Refresh

You must be a member for more than 1 day before you can chat.

Forums

→ Wolf Play is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

TKO

Darkseeker

Posts: 4512
#2720529
Give Award

My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Lucifer

Neutral

Posts: 258
#2720640
Give Award

ok so the last attempt looks great!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nez.ity

Game Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 2245
#2720643
Give Award

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

TKO

Darkseeker

Posts: 4512
#2720647
Give Award

Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nez.ity

Game Moderator
Darkseeker

Posts: 2245
#2720741
Give Award

Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio