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So I did this drawing https://postimg.cc/tYmMybrn and I really liked it show I was gonna put it into an online program and make it my pfp, so I did and... https://postimg.cc/ZWxvpb1C Yeah, I like it better on paper. Any advice on how to improve? (P.S I don't have money to get a spectacular art program or a tablet, so I use Krita and a trackpad.) Edited at February 15, 2020 05:54 PM by Flower Field
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That drawing is outstanding! My only critique is your lineart is a little bit wobbly! Try slowly drawing each line out and using a straight tool to help keep the lines clean and crisp. Otherwise, it's great! The art is very cute and the colors blend together wonderfully! Keep up the awesome work!! :) Flower Field said: So I did this drawing https://postimg.cc/tYmMybrn and I really liked it show I was gonna put it into an online program and make it my pfp, so I did and... https://postimg.cc/ZWxvpb1C Yeah, I like it better on paper. Any advice on how to improve? (P.S I don't have money to get a spectacular art program or a tablet, so I use Krita and a trackpad.)
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Thanks! I still need to explore the program a bit more and try out new stuff but practice makes perfect right. :D Eclipse's Rain said: That drawing is outstanding! My only critique is your lineart is a little bit wobbly! Try slowly drawing each line out and using a straight tool to help keep the lines clean and crisp. Otherwise, it's great! The art is very cute and the colors blend together wonderfully! Keep up the awesome work!! :) Flower Field said: So I did this drawing https://postimg.cc/tYmMybrn and I really liked it show I was gonna put it into an online program and make it my pfp, so I did and... https://postimg.cc/ZWxvpb1C Yeah, I like it better on paper. Any advice on how to improve? (P.S I don't have money to get a spectacular art program or a tablet, so I use Krita and a trackpad.)
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Shading is also a great improvement!
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Yes, the lines are a bit wobbly, but it is a good start. Once you figure out your own style, it will all click into place. Try adding more fuzz and fur, and also try shading all in one color. I found that filling in the background and main pic different shades of one color makes it unique and pop.
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