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Trust me, I am trying to decide if I want to keep her or not, she's beautiful 0-0
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Eevee, her red is just *^*
 Hallow's Eve
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Speaking of red markings, look how pretty she is!
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Yippie my alpha female is in labor!
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den spaces splurge it is, thanks ^^
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Bleak

I already have my daith pierced, because of migraines. I just kind of have to deal with it. The Daith piercing makes it better so I can tolerate it
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I keep forgetting game time is an hour behind my time.
I was so confused why my raffle didn't start and then I realized the time was different
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...one of his pups doesn't have red markings-
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Cae
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 Bleak
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Hallow,

Oh my, those suck. I've found a tight ball cap can help with my migraines while I wait for meds to kick in.. Also, you can pinch the part of your ear where you'd get a Daith piercing? That sometimes helps me as well. Hope you feel better soon!
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I love this man's red markings oml-
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I'd say 1
 kycantina
02:19:28 no. 1 swamp defender
either 1 or 2
 Caeruleum
02:19:22 Cae, Blue
forgot to add the most important part of the message: choose one LOL
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1
 Amygdala
02:19:12 Amy/Anpmygdala
Also i decided to do amy's daily song, where i post a random song i have been stuck with XD

Today's song is fact check
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Enjoy
 kycantina
02:18:49 no. 1 swamp defender
Cae, you have my blessing to turn em into bones if necessary :-; He gave me this pretty lady yesterday so I'm happy
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okay, this is VERY important:
1) 20 den spaces + 5 relic spaces
2) 45 relic spaces
3) save apples and try to find perfect custom base
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Cae
You're welcomw XD

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CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 05:13 PM


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So I'm looking for critique of my art
When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for
Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]
https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2
Hide and Seek [HEE contest]
http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:54 PM


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new artz added
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 06:59 PM


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Um they both look fine to me xD
CritiqueSeptember 18, 2018 07:32 PM


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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 03:31 AM


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Thank you :D
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 05:07 AM


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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.
Round out the ears a little?
The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!
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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?
CritiqueSeptember 19, 2018 09:15 AM


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Thanks every for the critique
Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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