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Aight im back, cat got out so then I had to run around the damn neighborhood ;-;

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gonna take 20 min for food to bake lol so.. im back till then.. kinda

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Stay safe!!

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:3*

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I'll be back, gotta walk home ;3

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Ooh, enjoy Snowball!!

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06:21:17 Asmodeus (he/they)

Fei

that must suck

06:21:00 Pack of Sharp Snap

still in the middle of a heatwave. yay

06:17:45 Asmodeus (he/they)

Bloody Face (No Face) rests their gaze intently on Baguette .
Stats: Social +1
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so gay and I love it

06:16:18 Asmodeus (he/they)

I wish I hadn't ran out of premium, I feel so weird not having a pink palette

06:15:48 Cat

*Labor Alert* Wolf G1|HW|+5 gave birth! Congrats!
Oh My! Your she-wolf had Triplets!

06:07:01 St. Algo's Pack/Mal

-WP Click-
Paws?

06:02:38 Reaper / Grim

Hills
Well damn 0-o I know where I need to be

Desire of The Hills

06:00:28 Hills / Desire

Why haven't I been exploring on Tundra earlier TwT I just went from like 500 Silver Coins to almost 800 in like an hour and a half

05:58:50 Pack of Sharp Snap

I'm so glad mine stays inside

05:56:39

Mine got mauled by a coyote. I think I'm winning.

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05:53:30 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

Sweet my wolves just took down an elephant without getting hit once

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-WP Click- man i love her

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Aight im back, cat got out so then I had to run around the damn neighborhood ;-;

05:45:36

Yay!

05:44:27 Snowflake, Queen

gonna take 20 min for food to bake lol so.. im back till then.. kinda

05:42:50

Stay safe!!

05:38:46 Reaper / Grim

:3*

05:38:37 Reaper / Grim

I'll be back, gotta walk home ;3

05:38:31

Ooh, enjoy Snowball!!

05:38:15 Snowflake, Queen

be back soon... dinner time

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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