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how long did it take/
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Listen it took way way way too long.
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Yeah. that's... quite a lot of pandas indeed. xD
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Lower check than normal?
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That is... definitely a lot of pandas lol
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I think I might stay up exploring till 2am today, just to see how much I got on my check. If it's $500 and I make $400 in tips this weekend, then I MIGHT be able to buy some apples, I might not though and just put all my tips towards my credit cards.
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Thought I'd be able to buy apples but I can't:/
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Do you guys ever get angry over things like A game account starting you over to the point you want to scream?
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It would be going better if I could have more pandas a lot easier buttttt its fine I guess. For real about to petition eve for more pandas in mountains though.
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Can't wait to see how much I make on my paycheck tomorrow, and what I make over the weekend, to see if I can buy any apples.
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hey apoth!
how's it going? :)
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Okay, time to drink more beer and explore in forest now that I have my 40 pandas
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Distant <3 My love <3
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ky,
hopefully! i haven't yet bred a greyscale x rosewood pup so we'll see haha
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Hey buddy <3
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Then again I'm used to it. I am not used to staying up until midnight unlike you xD

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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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